Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I have. I I ride a bike when I was young. Umm, I really go to school and play by bike. It's a happy time. I want to go back the time again.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's popular. There is all there are many shared by shared bikes in country and countryside. When we go to school or something somewhere else, we can scan the the picture and we can use it to go everywhere and.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 在回答中要注意时态一致、句子结构完整,以及避免重复和犹豫词。先用一句主题句直接回答(含正确时态),然后用一两句具体细节支持,使用连接词使句子更连贯。例如说明什么时候骑车、骑到哪里、与谁一起以及为什么难忘。尽量控制在不超过5句,减少“umm”“I I”等停顿。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I rode a bicycle a lot when I was a child, usually to school and to visit my friends. Often I would cycle with my brother around the neighborhood, which made those afternoons very enjoyable. Because we spent so much time outdoors, those memories feel very nostalgic.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更清晰、有条理并提供具体例子,避免语法错误和重复。先给直接回答,再用一到两句说明原因或例子,使用连接词(e.g. because, for example, therefore)。说明共享单车如何使用、在哪些地区更普遍以及它带来的好处或问题。保持句子简洁完整,减少重复词。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country, especially shared bikes in cities. For example, many people use app-based bikes to commute to work or school because they are cheap and convenient. In rural areas, private bicycles are still common for short trips to the market.
× Yeah, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
原句使用現在時態“I have”來回答過去是否擁有自行車的問題,不符合時態(面試問題為過去式“Did you have...”)。應使用過去式“did”或完整回答“Yes, I did.”來保持時態一致。建議在回答過去經驗時使用過去式。
× I I ride a bike when I was young.
✓ I rode a bike when I was young.
句中主述為過去時間“when I was young”,因此動詞應使用過去式。原句用現在式“ride”與過去時間不一致。建議將動詞改為過去式“rode”。
× Umm, I really go to school and play by bike.
✓ I used to go to school and play by bike.
原句用現在式“go”與談論過去習慣不匹配。可用“used to”表示過去常做的事,或將動詞改為過去式“I really went to school and played by bike.”。此處提供更自然的“used to”表達過去習慣。
× It's a happy time.
✓ Those were happy times.
談論過去時應使用過去式和復數以匹配“time”在此情境下表示一段時光(複數)。原句“It’s a happy time.”用現在式且單數,不自然。可改為“Those were happy times.”來更清楚表達過去的美好時光。
× I want to go back the time again.
✓ I want to go back to that time again.
原句缺少介詞“to”並且指示代詞不明確,應為“go back to that time”表示回到那段時間。此句可保留現在時(表達願望),但需補上介詞並使用“that”指代特定時期。
× Yes, it's popular.
✓ Yes, they are popular.
對方問的是“bikes”(複數),回答時主語應與之對應。原句用“It’s”指單一事物,不合適。應使用複數“they are”或更自然地回答“Bikes are popular.”。
× There is all there are many shared by shared bikes in country and countryside.
✓ There are many shared bikes in the city and countryside.
原句結構混亂並有重複詞“shared by shared”。要表達有很多共享單車,應使用存在句“there are many shared bikes”並清楚區分城市(city)和鄉村(countryside)。若指整個國家,可說“In both cities and the countryside, there are many shared bikes.”。
× When we go to school or something somewhere else, we can scan the the picture and we can use it to go everywhere and.
✓ When we go to school or other places, we can scan the QR code and use a bike to go anywhere.
句中多處問題:1) “something somewhere else”不自然,應為“other places”。2) “the the picture”有重複並且錯誤表達共享單車通常用的是“QR code”而非“picture”。3) 結尾“and.”不完整。改為“When we go to school or other places, we can scan the QR code and use a bike to go anywhere.”更清晰自然。