Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bag when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because I I see it every day. They use it every day.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Answer the examiner's question directly and avoid repeating or mis-hearing it. Provide a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief specific details (where you rode it, how often, or a short memory). Keep the answer natural, use linking words if you add more than one detail, and limit to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was about seven. I rode it to school and around my neighborhood almost every day, so I became very confident cycling. Because the roads were quiet, I often practised tricks with my friends on weekends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give specific reasons and use a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid repetition and filler (e.g., repeating 'every day'). Include one concrete example or group of people who use bikes, and keep it to a few concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances. For example, many students and market vendors cycle daily to get to school or to transport goods, especially in busy urban areas.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect pronoun use

× Did you have a bag when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student repeated the examiner's question incorrectly by using 'bag' instead of 'bike', which is a lexical error rather than grammar, but it causes a mismatch in reference. Replace 'bag' with 'bike' to match the examiner's question and maintain coherence.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because I I see it every day.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because I see them every day.

There are two issues: a duplicated word 'I I' and a pronoun/reference error. 'Bikes' is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'them', not 'it'. Also remove the repeated 'I'. Suggestion: proofread to remove duplication and ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.

Incorrect pronoun use

× They use it every day.

✓ They use them every day.

The pronoun 'it' is singular while the intended antecedent 'bikes' is plural. Use 'them' to match plural reference. Also ensure 'they' and 'them' consistently refer to the same plural subject (people use bikes; people use them).

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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