Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

It's a kind of worm, like when I grow children.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Now in my country, people usually travel by car because of the long distances and uphills. They don't feel quite.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and off-topic. Start with a direct, grammatically correct sentence addressing the question, and then add one or two brief supporting details. Use clear vocabulary (e.g. "yes/no", "I had/ I didn’t have") and correct tense. Keep it natural and concise, maximum 3–4 sentences. For example, say whether you had a bike, describe it, and mention a short memory or reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it around my neighborhood every afternoon. I remember learning to balance with my father's help, which made me feel very proud.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is partly relevant but has grammatical mistakes and an unclear final clause. Begin with a direct opinion, then give two specific reasons with linking words (e.g. "because", "however"). Avoid vague phrases like "They don't feel quite." Be concise and coherent, and use vocabulary relevant to transport and geography.

Ví dụ: In my country, bikes are not very popular nowadays because many places are far apart and the roads are very hilly. As a result, most people prefer cars for comfort and speed. However, bicycles are still common in flat urban areas for short trips and exercise.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× It's a kind of worm, like when I grow children.

✓ I didn't have one; I wanted to get one when I was older and had children.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It uses 'It's' (present) to answer a past question and 'a kind of worm' is semantically wrong. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Suggestion: answer in past tense to match the question ('Did you have'), express negative if you did not have a bike, and say the intended meaning: wanting a bike when older or when having children. Use clear clauses: 'I didn't have one; I wanted to get one when I was older and had children.' Suggested improvements: decide whether you had a bike (use past tense), avoid unrelated metaphors ('worm'), and separate ideas with punctuation or conjunctions.

Present tense issue

× Now in my country, people usually travel by car because of the long distances and uphills. They don't feel quite.

✓ Now in my country, people usually travel by car because of the long distances and hills. They don't feel comfortable riding bikes.

The first sentence is mostly acceptable but 'uphills' is nonstandard; use 'hills' or 'uphill roads'. This is a present tense/context usage issue (ID 6) because 'Now' requires present-tense descriptions and clearer vocabulary. The second sentence 'They don't feel quite.' is incomplete and ungrammatical: 'quite' needs a complement (e.g., 'comfortable'). This is also a sentence structure/adjective use problem, but based on the provided list it fits present tense/context (ID 6). Suggestion: replace 'uphills' with 'hills' or 'uphill roads' and complete the idea: 'They don't feel comfortable riding bikes.' This uses present simple to describe habitual behavior and provides a clear adjective 'comfortable.'

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Long— Lengthy; Soon; Yearn for
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