Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a hot back in my head when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, my country is my country is uh, the back in the country is very popular.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不自然且含有语言错误,信息不明确。首先要直接回答问题并给出简洁的主题句,然后用1-2个具体细节支持。避免发音或词汇错误(如把 “bike” 说成 “back” 或用错词)。可以描述自行车的外观、什么时候拥有或和谁一起骑等,以增加内容具体性和连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I rode it every weekend around the neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 此回答重复且表达混乱,缺乏具体支持细节。应先简短回答(Yes/No + 简要原因),然后用一两句具体说明流行的原因、使用场景或统计性描述。注意使用正确词汇(bike 而非 back)并用连接词(because, for example, especially)使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise; for example, students often cycle to school and people ride bikes in parks on weekends.
× Yes, I had a hot back in my head when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
原句“had a hot back in my head”不是自然或正确的英语表达,显然是口误或拼写错误,意思应为“有一辆自行车”。这属于句子结构/词汇使用错误。建议:注意单词拼写与发音的对应,把“hot back”更正为“bike”,完整句子保持过去时态,与提问一致。
× Yes, my country is my country is uh, the back in the country is very popular.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.
原句包含重复和无意义片段(“my country is my country is uh, the back in the country”),导致句子结构混乱无法理解。应将其简化为“Bikes are very popular in my country.”(现在一般时),与考官问及普及度的现在时态相符。建议:说话时避免重复或填充词,先组织好简单明确的句子:主语 + 谓语 + 补语(Bikes are very popular in my country)。