Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is correct but very short. To improve, give a brief topic sentence and add one specific supporting detail (e.g., who gave it to you, how often you used it, or a short memory). Keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences) and natural. Use a linking word if adding more than one detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a red bicycle when I was seven, and I rode it to school and the park almost every day. It helped me feel independent, and I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and could be more specific. Improve by using correct grammar (e.g., "they are cheaper"), adding a linking word, and giving a concrete reason or example (e.g., cost, traffic, or environmental concerns). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheaper than cars and easy to maintain. For example, many students ride bikes to school to avoid traffic and save money. In addition, cycling is common in crowded cities where parking is difficult.

× Yes, I think the bikes are very popular in my country because it's the cheaper.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheaper.

The original sentence has two issues: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'bikes' and incorrect contraction 'it's' referring to plural noun. Use no article when speaking generally about a plural noun ('bikes are'). Replace 'it's the cheaper' with 'they are cheaper' to match plural subject and use the comparative correctly. Suggestion: say 'bikes are cheaper' or 'they are cheaper than cars' to be more specific.

× Transport is very common, especially for the young people.

✓ Transport is very common, especially for young people.

The phrase 'the young people' is unnatural when referring to a general group; use 'young people' without the definite article. Also 'transport' as a general concept is fine, but you could say 'bicycle transport' or 'cycling' for clarity. Suggestion: remove 'the' when speaking about groups in general: 'especially for young people.'