Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and directly answer the question first, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid contradictory statements (saying you didn’t have a bike but then saying you used to go cycling suggests confusion). Use linking words to make the sequence clear and keep to a maximum of about 3–4 short sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t own a bike as a child. Instead, I often borrowed my friends’ bikes to cycle around the parks, and we also liked exploring the small caves near our neighborhood. Because I relied on friends’ bikes, I didn’t have my own until I was a teenager.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and use varied vocabulary (e.g., popular, common, widespread). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to organize your answer and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many households own at least one motorcycle or bicycle, especially among young people who use them for commuting and socializing. In addition, affordable prices and frequent local markets make them easy to buy.

× we can see a collection of bikes in our neighborhood at everyone's house.

✓ we can see collections of bikes in our neighborhood at everyone’s houses.

The phrase 'a collection of bikes' with 'everyone's house' creates a mismatch: 'everyone's house' is singular while referring to multiple households. Use plural nouns to match multiple people/places. Change to 'collections of bikes' and 'everyone’s houses' to indicate many different homes having collections. Suggestion: Match singular/plural across related nouns and consider 'many households have collections of bikes' for clarity.

× Every youngster in our city or our state has a very good interest in buying bikes, having a collection of bikes in their homes.

✓ Every youngster in our city or state has a strong interest in buying bikes and having collections of bikes in their homes.

'A very good interest' is unnatural; 'interest' doesn't normally take 'very good'. Also 'a collection of bikes in their homes' mixes singular 'a collection' with plural 'their homes'. Use 'strong interest' and plural 'collections' to agree with 'their homes'. Suggestion: Use natural collocations like 'strong interest' and keep number agreement (collections for multiple homes).