Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 시제 사용과 문장 구조에 오류가 있습니다. 우선 간단한 주제 문장으로 직접 답하고, 과거 시제를 사용해 어린 시절의 경험을 설명하세요. 필요하면 추가 정보(예: 누구와 탔는지, 얼마나 자주 탔는지)를 연결어(“When I was young,” “also,” “but”)로 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 문장(예: “Where?”)은 제거하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it almost every day to visit my friends and go to the park. When I got older I stopped riding regularly because I started commuting by car. However, I still have fond memories of learning to ride with my father.

Gợi ý: 응답이 혼란스럽고 문법·어휘 사용이 부정확합니다. 먼저 명확한 주제 문장으로 의견을 말한 후 이유와 구체적 예를 주세요. 연결어(“because,” “for example,” “however”)를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 이어야 합니다. 감정이나 결과를 표현할 때도 완전한 문장을 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think biking is quite popular in Korea because many people use bicycles for short trips and exercise. For example, you can often see cyclists along riverside paths and residential streets. However, in busy cities some people prefer cars for convenience, so cycling is more common in parks and suburbs.

× I'm riding a bike in my childhood, but this day I don't ride the bike. Where?

✓ I rode a bike in my childhood, but these days I don't ride a bike. Where?

The student used present continuous 'I'm riding' for a past habitual action; use simple past 'I rode'. 'this day' is incorrect for habitual present — use 'these days'. Also article use: 'a bike' not 'the bike' when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use simple past for past habits (I rode) and 'these days' for current habitual situations.

× Yes, I live in Korea, in Korea riding bikes, people or so many in the road, so I am driving my car.

✓ Yes, I live in Korea. Many people ride bikes on the roads in Korea, so I drive my car.

Original sentence is fragmented and word order is incorrect. 'in Korea riding bikes, people or so many in the road' is ungrammatical. Use clear clauses: 'Many people ride bikes on the roads in Korea' and cause/result: 'so I drive my car.' Use simple present for general facts: 'live', 'ride', 'drive'.

× When I driving my car, I'm very.

✓ When I drive my car, I feel very nervous.

'When I driving' lacks auxiliary verb; use simple present 'drive' after 'when' for habitual actions. 'I'm very.' is incomplete — needs adjective complement ('nervous', 'careful', etc.). Suggestion: complete the predicate and use correct verb form: 'When I drive my car, I feel very nervous.'