Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 직접적인 대답은 좋았습니다만, 답변이 너무 짧고 상세한 이유나 배경 설명이 없어 점수가 제한됩니다. 다음을 개선하세요: 1) 토픽 문장으로 직접 답하고(이미 함), 2) 이유나 간단한 세부사항을 1~2문장 더 추가하세요(예: 가족 상황, 생활환경, 교통수단), 3) 연결어를 사용해 논리적으로 이어가세요(예: because, so, therefore), 4) 문장 수는 5문장 이내로 유지하세요.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't. I grew up in a city where my family relied on public transport, so we never bought a bike. Because I lived close to my school, walking was usually more convenient. As a result, I never had the chance to learn to ride when I was young.

Gợi ý: 의미 전달이 어렵고 문법과 표현이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 개선 포인트: 1) 질문에 직접 답한 뒤 이유를 명확하게 제시하세요(예: 도시 구조, 인프라, 기후), 2) 문법적 오류를 고치고 자연스러운 연결어 사용하세요(예: because, therefore, however), 3) 구체적 예시나 비교를 덧붙이면 신뢰도가 올라갑니다. 문장은 3~4개로 간결하게 유지하세요.

Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Because many people live in densely built cities with heavy traffic, cycling can be inconvenient and unsafe. Moreover, public transport is affordable and well-developed, so most people prefer buses or trains rather than bikes.

× No, because in my country there are many towns building people, so I can't.

✓ No, because in my country many towns are still being built, so people don't have bikes.

The original sentence has multiple issues: awkward word order and incorrect phrase 'towns building people' which is ungrammatical. This is primarily a sentence structure problem (ID 26) and preposition/pronoun misuse (ID 11/12) because the intended meaning is unclear. I corrected the structure to 'many towns are still being built' to indicate ongoing construction (present continuous passive) and added 'so people don't have bikes' to convey the likely result. Suggestion: clarify the intended subject and verb, use passive voice for 'towns being built' and match the result clause with an appropriate subject ('people') and verb form ('don't have').