Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, now the environment is more important, so the bikes are popular in our country.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且语法时态错误。应使用过去时直接回答并给出简短扩展说明,最好一到两句补充细节(如什么时候有、谁给的或如何使用)。使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about eight, which my parents bought me for my birthday. I used to ride it to the park almost every afternoon.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 答案有观点和原因但表达不够自然,句式稍显生硬。建议把原因和结果分成两部分,用连接词(for example, because, so)并给出具体例子(如共享单车、城市政策)。保持不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think they are quite popular now because more people care about the environment and traffic congestion. For example, many cities have introduced bike-sharing schemes and dedicated bike lanes, so cycling has become a convenient alternative to driving.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
原句使用現在時態“have”去回答過去式問題“Did you have...?”,時態不一致。此處應使用過去式助動詞“did”來表示過去的擁有經驗。建議在回答過去的Yes/No問題時,使助動詞或主要動詞與提問時的時態一致,例如用“Yes, I did.”或更完整地說“Yes, I had a bike.”。
× Yes, now the environment is more important, so the bikes are popular in our country.
✓ Yes, environmental awareness is increasing now, so bicycles are popular in our country.
原句時態與表達不夠自然。“now the environment is more important”結構不通順且把“環境變得更重要”表達為主語,應改為說“人們對環境的意識在提高”或“環保意識在增強”。此外“the bikes”不必加定冠詞;用“bicycles”或“bikes”即可。建議使用現在進行或一般現在說明當前趨勢,例如“environmental awareness is increasing”或“people care more about the environment”以使語意清晰自然。