Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No I didn't. I often sat on the back of my parents bike and they will bring me. They would bring me around and that's why I don't know how to ride a bike to this day.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes it is. Most people go to work by bike and there are free bikes on the road. Providing services to people in China.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并保持时态一致,补充一两个具体细节并用连接词使语句连贯。避免重复表达并控制在最多5句。可以把原因和结果分开说明,例如说明父母如何带你骑车以及这导致你至今不会骑车。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have my own bike as a child. Instead, I often sat on the back of my parents' bicycle when they took me out, so I never learned to ride. Because I was always a passenger, I didn't get the chance to practice balancing or pedaling. As a result, I still don't know how to ride a bike today.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答应更具体并用连贯连接词,把观点、理由和例子组织好。注意主谓一致和完整句子,解释“free bikes”是什么意思并给出影响或原因。尽量给出一到两个具体事实或个人观察。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use bicycles or shared e-bikes for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient. For example, bike-sharing services provide thousands of bikes across cities, which makes it easy for commuters to rent a bike for a short trip. Consequently, cycling is a common part of daily life for many residents.
× No I didn't. I often sat on the back of my parents bike and they will bring me.
✓ No, I didn't. I often sat on the back of my parents' bike and they would bring me.
问题类型:过去时错误(ID 5)。原句中第一句时态为过去(I didn't),后半句混用了过去时(sat)和将来时(will bring),上下文描述过去反复发生的动作,应使用过去习惯性表达“would”或“used to”。此外,parents bike 应为所有格 parents' bike。建议:在叙述过去的习惯动作时使用 would 或 used to;注意所有格用法。
× They would bring me around and that's why I don't know how to ride a bike to this day.
✓ They would bring me around, and that's why I don't know how to ride a bike to this day.
问题类型:句子结构/标点与连词(接近26或16),但符合题单中“Incorrect conjunction use”(ID 16)和“Sentence structure errors”(ID 26)。原句缺少逗号使连贯性下降,时态上前半句是过去习惯(would bring),后半句是现在完成的状态(don't know),时态搭配可以接受,但需要用逗号连接并保持清晰。建议:在连接并列句时使用逗号加连词,使句子更清晰。
× Yes it is. Most people go to work by bike and there are free bikes on the road. Providing services to people in China.
✓ Yes, they are. Most people go to work by bike, and there are shared bikes on the roads providing services to people in China.
问题类型:主谓一致与句子结构(ID 27 和 26)。原句“Yes it is.” 中主语应指代“bikes”,为复数,谓语应为 are(Yes, they are)。“free bikes on the road” 表达不准确,应为“shared bikes”(共享单车)或“free-to-use bikes”(可免费使用的单车),并且最后的短句“Providing services to people in China.” 不是完整句子,应与前句合并为分词短语或改为完整句。建议:确认代词与所指名词数一致;避免使用不完整的句子,用分词短语或连词连接。