Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add 1–2 specific supporting details with logical linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing. Work on grammar (tenses, articles) and natural collocations (e.g., “when I was a teenager,” “my father surprised me with a bike”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a teenager, my father surprised me with a bicycle for my birthday. It was my first time owning one, and I remember feeling very excited because I could ride to school and visit friends more easily.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion sentence, then support it with 1–2 clear, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “as a result”). Simplify language and correct collocations (e.g., “motorbikes,” “save money,” “move around”). Avoid vague phrases like “too much poverty.”

Ví dụ: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and fuel-efficient. For example, many people use motorbikes to commute to work since they cost less than cars and are easier to park in crowded cities.

× This question is quite fantastic.

✓ This question is quite interesting.

'Fantastic' is not grammatically wrong but sounds unnatural in this context; 'interesting' better fits describing a question. Use adjectives that match the intended meaning and register.

× Yes, when I was in my teenage, my father gave me a surprise on my birthday and gave me when the surprise was that he gave me a bike, and this is when I see a bike. This was very strong.

✓ Yes, when I was a teenager, my father surprised me on my birthday by giving me a bike. I remember seeing the bike for the first time; it made a strong impression on me.

Multiple tense and structure errors: 'in my teenage' is incorrect — use the noun phrase 'a teenager'. The repeated 'gave me' and the clause 'gave me when the surprise was that he gave me a bike' are redundant and ungrammatical; simplify using the past simple 'surprised me by giving me a bike'. 'This is when I see a bike' mixes tenses; use past 'I remember seeing the bike'. 'This was very strong' is vague; 'made a strong impression on me' is clearer. Suggestions: use simple past consistently for past events, avoid repetition, and choose clear expressions for impressions.

× This was very strong.

✓ It made a strong impression on me.

'Strong' alone as a predicate is awkward here. Use a noun phrase 'a strong impression' or an adverbial phrase. This clarifies the meaning and is idiomatic.

× Yes, the bike played a significant role in our today lives as usual as as we know that according to the inflation rate and too much poverty, the almost everyone is using the motorbikes from which they could save their cost expense and will easily move on.

✓ Yes, bikes play a significant role in our daily lives. As we know, because of inflation and widespread poverty, many people use motorbikes to save money and travel more easily.

Several issues: 'the bike' (definite article) is wrong for the general idea — use plural 'bikes' or no article. 'Our today lives' is ungrammatical; use 'our daily lives'. 'As usual as as' is redundant and incorrect. 'According to the inflation rate and too much poverty' is awkward; 'because of inflation and widespread poverty' is clearer. 'The almost everyone' is incorrect quantifier usage; use 'many people' or 'almost everyone'. 'Save their cost expense' is nonstandard — use 'save money' or 'reduce expenses'. 'Will easily move on' mixes future and general present; use present tense 'travel more easily' for habitual actions. Suggestions: use plural/singular correctly for general statements, use idiomatic phrases (daily lives, save money), and keep present simple for general truths.