Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevabınız anlaşılır ancak dilbilgisi ve akış sorunları var. Şu konulara odaklanın: (1) Geçmiş zaman kullanımı: 'have never had' yerine çocukluk için 'I never had' daha doğal olur. (2) Doğru yapı ve prepozisyonlar: 'asked my family for one' şeklinde söyleyin. (3) İlgiyi belirtirken sıralama ve bağlaç kullanın: 'so I wasn't interested in riding a bike.' şeklinde kısa ve net cümleler kurun. (4) Maksimum 3 cümleyle doğrudan cevap verin ve destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin.

Ví dụ: No, I never had a bike when I was a child. I never asked my parents for one, so I wasn't really interested in riding. Instead, I preferred playing team sports with my friends.

Gợi ý: Cevabınız fikir veriyor fakat dilbilgisi, kelime seçimi ve bağlaçlarda gelişme gerekli. Düzeltme önerileri: (1) Daha doğal başlangıç: 'Not really' veya 'Bicycles aren't very popular.' (2) Zaman ifadesi: 'these days' doğru, 'in these days' değil. (3) Karşılaştırma ve neden belirtirken net bağlaç kullanın: 'because' sonrası düzgün yapı: 'because they are cheaper than cars' . (4) Yol eksikliği için doğru ifade: 'there are no safe cycle lanes' veya 'there aren't many safe bike lanes.' (5) Bir-iki kısa cümleyle neden ve bir örnek verin.

Ví dụ: Not really; bicycles aren't very popular in my country. These days motorbikes are more common because they're cheaper than cars and there aren't many safe bike lanes in cities, so people prefer motorcycles for convenience.

× I have never had a bike because I never asked for to my family so I never interested in ride a bike.

✓ I never had a bike because I never asked my family for one, so I was never interested in riding a bike.

Multiple errors: 1) Tense choice: 'have never had' is present perfect, but context 'when you were a child' requires past simple 'never had'. 2) Incorrect use of 'asked for to my family': the correct pattern is 'ask someone for something' so use 'asked my family for one'. 3) Missing auxiliary/adjective use: 'I never interested' is incorrect; use 'I was never interested' (be + adjective). 4) Verb form after 'interested in' requires gerund: 'riding' not 'ride'. Suggestions: use past simple for past time expressions, follow 'ask someone for something' word order, include appropriate form of 'be' for states (was/were), and use gerund after preposition 'in'.

× Not too much, but motorbikes are more popular in these days because it's cheaper than cars and there is no any bike ways to ride safe.

✓ Not very much, but motorbikes are more popular these days because they are cheaper than cars and there are no bike lanes to ride safely.

Errors and fixes: 1) 'Not too much' is colloquial; 'Not very much' fits better. 2) 'in these days' is incorrect preposition/phrase; use 'these days'. 3) 'it's cheaper than cars' has number/pronoun mismatch: refer to motorbikes (plural) so use 'they are cheaper than cars'. 4) 'there is no any bike ways' mixes 'no' and 'any' and uses wrong nouns; correct is 'there are no bike lanes' (plural agreement and correct noun for paths). 5) 'to ride safe' needs adverb 'safely' not adjective. Suggestions: match subject number with verb and pronoun, avoid combining 'no' with 'any', use standard collocations ('bike lanes'), and use adverb form after verbs.