Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cümlelerinizde zaman ve dilbilgisi hataları var; ayrıca cevaplarınız tekrarcı ve doğal değil. Öncelikle doğru zaman kullanımı ve özne-fiil uyumuna dikkat edin (ör. 'When I was a child' ve 'I liked cycling'). Cevabınızı doğrudan bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp, bir veya iki destekleyici detay vererek 2–4 cümle içinde tutun. Bağlaçlar (because, so, therefore) ile neden veya sonuç ekleyin ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child my dad bought me a small bicycle and I often rode it with my friends in the neighborhood. Because we didn’t have many entertainment options nearby, cycling became our favorite pastime and we rode almost every afternoon.

Gợi ý: Cevabınız kısa ve tekrarlayıcı; ayrıca bazı kelimeler yanlış seçilmiş (ör. 'cultic' yerine 'crowded' veya 'limited public transport'). Daha spesifik nedenler verin ve bağlantı sözcüklerini doğru kullanın. Önerilen yapı: doğrudan cevap + iki destekleyici sebep + kısa sonuç. Kelime seçimine dikkat edin ve basit, anlaşılır ifadeler kullanın.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many cities have heavy traffic and limited public transport, so people often choose bicycles for short trips. Also, cycling is cheap and healthy, which makes it a practical option for many people.

× When I bore a child, I really like bikes, so yeah, my dad bought me one.

✓ When I was a child, I really liked bikes, so my dad bought me one.

The student used 'bore a child' which is incorrect meaning and wrong verb form. The correct expression is 'was a child' (state) and the rest of the sentence refers to past time, so use simple past 'liked'. Suggestion: use 'when I was a child' to describe childhood and keep past tense consistently.

× I like to cycling too much with my friends, so yeah, I have a bike in my childhood years.

✓ I liked cycling a lot with my friends, so I had a bike during my childhood.

Two issues: 'like to cycling' mixes infinitive and -ing form; use 'like cycling' or 'like to cycle'. Also the sentence refers to past period ('childhood'), so verbs should be in past tense: 'liked' and 'had'. 'In my childhood years' is better expressed as 'during my childhood.' Suggestion: use consistent verb forms and past tense for past time references.

× Yes, it's popular, absolutely, because. Transportation is very cultic in my country so using a bike is more useful for us.

✓ Yes, they are very popular, absolutely, because public transport is limited in my country, so using a bike is more useful for us.

Subject agreement and word choice errors: 'it's popular' refers to 'bikes' (plural), so use 'they are popular.' The sentence fragment 'because.' should be joined to the explanation. 'Transportation is very cultic' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'public transport is limited' or 'transportation is not well developed.' Also maintain present simple: 'using a bike is more useful' can remain but sounds better as 'so using a bike is more practical.' Suggestion: match plurality with verb, choose correct vocabulary ('public transport' or 'transportation'), and avoid sentence fragments.

× So yes, it's popular.

✓ So yes, they're popular.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'bikes' (plural), so use plural subject pronoun 'they' and 'are' instead of 'is.' Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with the noun they replace.