Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike when I was more I ride it every day with my family.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think bikes are popular when in the 70s because people used to carry things around with bikes, but nowadays people don't use bikes because we have cars.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 句子时态和语法有错误,表达不够清晰。回答应直接回应问题并使用过去时,先给主题句,然后用一到两句具体细节支持(例如谁和你一起骑、骑哪种类型的自行车、多久骑一次或一次有趣的经历)。尽量用连词(如“and”、“so”、“because”)使句子连贯,且不要超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was a child, and I used to ride it every day with my family. My parents would take me to the park on weekends, and I learned to ride without training wheels when I was six.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 观点明确但表达有些笼统且有语法小错误。回答应先给出清晰的总体观点(现在是否流行),然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持,比如提到城市化、公共交通或环保意识的变化。使用连接词(例如“however”、“because”)让句子更连贯,避免不必要冗长。
Ví dụ: I think bicycles were more popular in the past, especially in the 1970s, because many people used them for carrying goods. However, nowadays cars and public transport are more common, so fewer people rely on bikes except for exercise or short trips.
× Yes, I have a bike when I was more I ride it every day with my family.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was younger. I rode it every day with my family.
问题类型:现在时使用错误(对应ID 6)。原句中“have”与时间状语“when I was…”矛盾,描述过去的经历应使用过去时;此外句子结构混乱,‘when I was more’是不正确表达,应为‘when I was younger’。建议将动词改为过去时(had, rode),并把句子分为两句以提高清晰度。
× I think bikes are popular when in the 70s because people used to carry things around with bikes, but nowadays people don't use bikes because we have cars.
✓ I think bikes were popular in the 70s because people used to carry things on bikes, but nowadays people don't use bikes as much because we have cars.
问题类型:现在时使用错误(对应ID 6)。句子中谈论的是过去(70s),谓语应使用过去时“were”。另外,介词搭配错误('carry things around with bikes' 不自然),建议用 'carry things on bikes';最后补充“as much”更符合表达程度变化。整体把描述过去的部分用过去时,现状用现在时。