Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had. When I was seven years old, my parents bought a bike for me. It was a very beautiful bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I think bikes are popular in my country. When I am work on the country I can see many bikes near the street.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且結構更清晰。第一句可直接說“I did”或“I had one”以顯得自然;接著用一到兩句補充細節,如顏色、款式或你最喜歡的回憶,並使用連接詞(because/so/and)使語流更順。注意句子數量不超過五句且避免重複信息(例如不必兩次說父母買)。
Ví dụ: I did. My parents bought me a bright red bike when I was seven, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood. I especially remember learning to balance on it because my older cousin helped me practice every weekend.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更準確的語法與更具體的細節。避免重複(例如兩次說“I think/bikes are popular”)。使用正確時態和語法,例如改用“When I work in the city/see many bikes on the street”或“When I travel to the countryside”。然後給出一個原因或例子(如環保、交通便利或城市自行車道)以豐富內容並使用連接詞(because/for example/so)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think so. In my city many people use bicycles for short trips because they are cheap and practical, and there are plenty of bike lanes near shops and schools. For example, I often see commuters riding bikes to work during the morning rush.
× Yes, I had.
✓ Yes, I did.
学生原句“I had.”用于回答“Did you have a bike when you were a child?”时不合适。英语中一般用助动词“did”来简短肯定或肯定回答过去式疑问句,正确的简短回答是“Yes, I did.”。建议:当回答以“Did”开头的过去时疑问句时,用“did”或“didn't”做简短回答,或用完整句“Yes, I had a bike.”。
× When I was seven years old, my parents bought a bike for me.
✓ When I was seven years old, my parents bought me a bike.
原句“bought a bike for me”语法上可理解但更自然的英语表达是“bought me a bike”——动词buy与人称间接宾语常用双宾结构(bought someone something)。建议使用更地道的表达“bought me a bike”或完整说“bought a bike for me”都可,但双宾结构更简洁。
× When I am work on the country I can see many bikes near the street.
✓ When I am working in the countryside, I can see many bikes near the street.
该句存在多处问题:1) “When I am work”错误——在进行时中动词应为动名词/现在分词形式,故用“am working”(属于动词+ -ing,问题类型8和现在时问题6,但主要是现在进行时形式错误,归类为Present tense issue)。2) “on the country”介词使用错误,正确应为“in the countryside”或“in the country”。3) “near the street”虽然可懂,但更自然可用“on the street”或“near the street”均可,常见说法为“on the street”。综合修改为“When I am working in the countryside, I can see many bikes on the street.” 建议:学习并练习现在进行时结构(am/are/is + verb-ing)、常用介词短语(in the countryside / on the street)。