Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix tense and article errors (e.g., "one of the reasons," "a village," "bikes were expensive"). Avoid repetition and unnecessary filler such as "that means."

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. I grew up in a small village where bikes were considered a luxury, so my family couldn't afford one. As a result, I usually walked or shared rides with neighbors when I needed to go somewhere.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and then add specific reasons with appropriate linking words. Correct vocabulary and collocations (e.g., "bikes are very popular," "we don't have many cars or motorbikes"). Use concrete examples and avoid unclear words like "lazy water."

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Because many people can't afford cars or motorbikes, they use bicycles for daily travel and to transport goods; for example, vendors often carry produce and water containers on bicycles to sell at local markets.

× When I was a child, I didn't have a bike and I think one of the reason was that I was born in a village, a place where having things like a bike or other things would be something which is more luxury.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike and I think one of the reasons was that I was born in a village, a place where having things like a bike or other items would be considered a luxury.

Incorrect singular/plural: 'one of the reason' should be 'one of the reasons' because 'one of' must be followed by a plural noun. Also 'other things' is vague; use 'other items' and 'would be something which is more luxury' is ungrammatical — 'considered a luxury' is correct. Suggestion: After 'one of' use plural nouns, replace vague phrases with precise nouns, and use 'considered a luxury'.

× So and because during that era bike was expensive, that means.

✓ Because during that era bikes were expensive, that was the reason.

Tense and number: 'bike was expensive' is acceptable but 'during that era bike was expensive, that means' is awkward and mixes tenses. Use past plural 'bikes were expensive' and 'that was the reason' to keep past tense and clarity. Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense and match subject-number; remove filler 'that means' or replace with a clear past-tense clause.

× Yes, biker so popular because we don't have those much cars in our country or let's say motorbike.

✓ Yes, bikes are so popular because we don't have that many cars in our country, or I should say motorcycles.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice: 'biker so popular' is incorrect form; the intended subject is 'bikes' (plural) so use 'bikes are so popular'. 'those much cars' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'that many cars'. 'motorbike' better plural 'motorcycles' or 'motorbikes'. Suggestion: Use correct plural nouns and verb 'are', and use 'that many' for quantity.

× So people use bike to go from one place to another or sometimes even to carry some things, some good, some lazy water or food from one place to another.

✓ So people use bikes to go from one place to another or sometimes even to carry things, such as goods, water, or food from one place to another.

Pronoun and noun form errors: 'use bike' should be 'use bikes' or 'use a bike'; 'some things, some good, some lazy water' contains incorrect determiners and word choice. 'goods' is plural and 'lazy water' is nonsensical — likely 'lots of water' or just 'water'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns consistently, avoid 'some' repeated awkwardly, and choose correct nouns like 'goods' and 'water'.