Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Mô phỏngPart12026-08-22 17:26:23

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do. I think it's popular in our country.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答不自然且语法不正确,时态错误且过于简短。应直接用过去时并给出一到两句具体细节来丰富答案,例如什么时候得到、谁送的或经常去哪里骑。还要注意句子不超过5句且使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was eight, and I often rode it to the park with my friends. It was my main way of getting around the neighborhood, so I practiced balancing and fixing flat tires.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答重复且缺乏具体细节与理由。应避免简单肯定,多给出原因或例子并使用连接词(例如, because, for example)来组织信息,同时保证用词一致(bikes → they)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips; for example, many students and commuters use them to go to school or work. In addition, cities have been building more bike lanes recently, which encourages more people to ride.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

学生在回答关于过去的问题(Did you have a bike when you were a child?)时使用了现在时的助动词 have,语法时态不匹配。应使用过去时助动词 did 或过去式回答。建议用“Yes, I did.”或更完整的“Yes, I had.”,在此情境下更自然的是“Yes, I did.”。

Present tense issue

× Yes, I do. I think it's popular in our country.

✓ Yes, I do. I think they're popular in my country.

问题询问的是“bikes”(复数)是否在你国家流行。学生第二句写成“It’s popular”中使用了单数主语it,与前文的复数bikes不一致。应使用复数代词或复数名词形式,如“they're”或“bikes are”。另外将“our country”改为更自然的“my country”更符合考生个人观点表达(可选)。建议改为 “I think they're popular in my country.”或“I think bikes are popular in my country.”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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