Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bag.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, Buck is popular in my country because the traffic is terrible. Some of people choose to go to work by bike instead of driving.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答与问题不符且语言有误。应直接回答是否有自行车,使用过去时并给出简短扩展,例如说明什么时候得到的或是否经常骑。注意语法时态与词汇(bike 而非 bag)。建议用1-2句主题句再加1-2句具体细节,控制在最多5句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, which my parents bought me for my birthday. I used to ride it to the park every weekend and learned to balance without training wheels.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答基本相关但存在词汇和语法错误,以及表达可更自然连贯。应使用明确的主题句,然后用连接词提供具体原因和例子,注意人称和复数形式(‘bikes’,不是 ‘Buck’;‘some people’,不是 ‘Some of people’)。可补充一到两个具体细节(如城市、通勤距离或自行车道情况)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Because traffic is often heavy in major cities, many people choose cycling as a faster and cheaper way to commute. For example, office workers in my city often cycle short distances and there are several dedicated bike lanes that make cycling safer.
× Yes, I have a bag.
✓ Yes, I had a bike.
句子与提问时态不一致且内容不符合问题。考官问的是过去(Did you have...),学生应使用过去时并直接回答是否有自行车。原句使用现在时的“have”且提到“bag(包)”,与问题主题(bike,自行车)不符。建议:回答过去的拥有情况时使用过去时(had),并保持与提问内容一致。
× Yes, Buck is popular in my country because the traffic is terrible.
✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because the traffic is terrible.
使用现在时陈述普遍事实是可以的,但原句中主词“Buck”拼写错误且单复数不当。原问题询问“bikes”,应保持复数形式。这里需要用复数“bikes are”表示一般事实。建议:注意名词拼写并与上下文保持单复数一致。
× Some of people choose to go to work by bike instead of driving.
✓ Some people choose to go to work by bike instead of driving.
短语“some of people”结构不正确。若要使用“some of + the/these/those + noun”,需加限定词;单独使用时应为“some people”。建议:去掉“of”或在“people”前加限定词(例如“some of the people”)。