Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 首先，句子时态和词汇有误（如写作“writing”应为“riding”），表述不够自然且信息不够清晰。回答应直接回应问题并给出一两句支持细节，例如说明原因和回忆。避免冗长的犹豫词，保持不超过5句。练习时注意正确时态（过去时）和准确词汇，使用连接词如“because”或“so”来增强连贯性。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I wasn't confident riding one. My parents thought it was too dangerous for me, so they never bought one. As a result, I learned to use public transport instead.

Gợi ý: 回答总体方向正确，但有停顿、重复和口头填充词（umm, uh），句子结构有些混乱。可以用更自然、精练的表达并加入具体细节（比如城市、数据或优点），用连接词如“because”或“for example”使逻辑更清晰。控制在3-4句内，使用更准确的词汇如“popular”、“commute”、“shared bikes”。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities where traffic is heavy. Many people use bicycles to commute because they are cheap and convenient. For example, shared-bike programs have made cycling even more accessible and improved daily life for commuters.

× They are also, uh, shared bike in our country, which improves people's life.

✓ They also have shared bikes in our country, which improves people's lives.

原句使用了不正确的“there be”结构。英语中表达“有……(存在)”通常用 there is/are 或者主语为“they have”。原句开头用“They are ... shared bike”结构错误，且单复数不一致（bike 应为 bikes），life 应为复数 lives 表示一般人的生活。建议用法：要强调存在某物可用 there are + 复数，或用 have 表示拥有/提供。比如：There are shared bikes in our country. 或 They also have shared bikes in our country.

× No, I'm not good at writing when I was a child, so my parents refused to buy a bike for me.

✓ No, I wasn't good at riding when I was a child, so my parents refused to buy a bike for me.

原句中时态和词语使用错误：一是用了现在时的“I'm not good at”与时间状语“when I was a child”冲突，应使用过去时 wasn't/were not。二是词汇写错：应为 ride/riding（骑），不是 write/writing（写）。改为过去时态加过去分词形式（或形容词）更符合语境。建议：回忆过去能力或习惯时用过去时，如 I wasn't good at riding when I was a child.

× you can see many people ride, ride a bike on the road

✓ you can see many people riding bikes on the road

原句重复使用 ride, ride 且句子中描述正在进行的动作应使用动词的 -ing 形式（现在分词）来表示一般事实或正在发生的动作。并且复数形式更自然：many people riding bikes。建议把不必要的重复去掉并使用 riding。

× it must be, uh, the good choice for them to commute.

✓ it must be a good choice for them to commute.

原句中冠词使用错误且形容词顺序/限定词不当。英文中单数可数名词前需用不定冠词 a/an 表示“一个/一种”，不能直接用 the good choice。改为 a good choice 更符合一般陈述。建议：使用 a good choice 来表达“一个好的选择”。

× which improves people's life.

✓ which improves people's lives.

原句中名词复数使用错误。people 是复数，表示很多人的生活时应使用复数形式 lives。建议：搭配 people 使用 lives，或用 people's quality of life 等更具体的表达。