Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had one when I was five years old. I still remember the first time I go to the supermarket and buy the bike. It cost me CN¥100.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, bikes are actually popular in my country, China, because the price of the bicycle is almost affordable to every people, everybody and the the bicycle is convenient to go.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 句子时态和语法需修正,回答应更自然并包含一到两句具体细节以丰富内容。比如将“I go”改为“I went”,并说明谁陪同、车的颜色或学会骑车的经历。同时控制在最多五句,避免重复信息。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was five. I remember going to the supermarket with my parents to buy it; the bike was bright red and cost about CN¥100. I learned to ride it in the courtyard and felt very proud when I could go without training wheels.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 句子结构和词汇使用需更准确,避免重复(如“every people, everybody”)并用连词使逻辑更清楚。可以给出具体原因和一个例子,例如通勤或短途购物,同时控制长度。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are still very popular in China because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use e-bikes or shared bikes to commute to work or to do quick shopping in neighborhoods.
× I still remember the first time I go to the supermarket and buy the bike.
✓ I still remember the first time I went to the supermarket and bought the bike.
句子在描述过去发生的具体事件(“I still remember… the first time”),应该使用过去时。原句使用一般现在时的动词 go 和 buy,与语境不一致。建议将动词改为过去式 went 和 bought,以符合叙述过去经历的时态。
× because the price of the bicycle is almost affordable to every people, everybody and the the bicycle is convenient to go.
✓ because the price of bicycles is almost affordable to everybody, and bicycles are convenient to use.
原句中存在名词单复数和词语重复问题:’every people’ 是错误用法,正确应为 everybody 或 every person;此外前后混用单数 bicycle 与泛指复数不一致,应使用复数 bicycles 表示'自行车'这类事物普遍情况;句中还有重复的定冠词“the the”。同时动词搭配与用法不当,’convenient to go’ 不自然,建议改为 'convenient to use' 或 'convenient for getting around'。建议使用复数形式并改正搭配以使句子通顺自然。
× I still remember the first time I go to the supermarket and buy the bike.
✓ I still remember the first time I went to the supermarket and bought the bike.
在英语中谈论首次经历时,如果指的是当时购买的那辆车,用上定冠词 'the bike' 是可以的,但更自然的表达也可以是 'bought a bike'。原句的主要问题是时态(已在上文更正),冠词本身可保留或改为不定冠词,根据语境选择。这里给出带 'the' 的改正句保持原意。
× the price of the bicycle is almost affordable to every people, everybody and the the bicycle is convenient to go.
✓ the price of bicycles is almost affordable to everybody, and bicycles are convenient to use.
原句中 'every people' 是错误的代词/名词搭配,应使用 everybody 或 every person 来表达“每个人”。句中还出现重复词 'everybody and the the',需要删除冗余并重组句子。建议使用 everybody 并调整名词复数以匹配泛指意义。