Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, use correct tense and simpler natural expressions, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "kid" and "juvenile" together) and fix grammar (use past tense for childhood). Add a brief concluding remark if relevant.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought riding a bike or motorcycle was too dangerous for me, so they wouldn't allow it. After I turned 18 I moved to Canada, where I started using public transport instead.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer followed by specific reasons and use linking words for coherence. Correct word choice (e.g., "riding" not "writing"), avoid repetition, and provide one clear example or comparison to support your point.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among children and young people. Many prefer riding bicycles and motorcycles because it is cheap and convenient, and it lets them enjoy the scenery and fresh air. For example, students often ride to school and young people use bikes to meet friends on weekends.

× Unfortunately, no, I don't have any bike.

✓ Unfortunately, no, I didn't have a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using 'don't have' (present) is incorrect for a past situation. Also 'any bike' is unnatural; 'a bike' or 'any bikes' would be better. Suggestion: use past simple 'didn't have' and 'a bike'.

× When I was a kid, being a juvenile, my parents didn't allow me to get a bike or a motorcycle as they think about that thing that it would be dangerous for a kid to drive.

✓ When I was a kid, my parents didn't allow me to get a bike or a motorcycle because they thought it would be dangerous for a child to ride one.

Several issues: 'being a juvenile' is redundant and awkward; omit it. The clause 'they think about that thing that it would be dangerous' mixes tenses and is unidiomatic. Use past tense 'thought' to match 'didn't allow' and 'because' to give reason. Use 'ride' rather than 'drive' for bikes/motorcycles. Replace 'a kid' with 'a child' or repeat 'kid' consistently. Suggestion: simplify phrasing and match past tense.

× After I got 18, I went to Canada, so there is no way that I can have a bike and.

✓ After I turned 18, I went to Canada, so there was no way I could have a bike then.

'After I got 18' is non-idiomatic; use 'turned 18'. The sentence mixes past actions with present modal 'can' and 'there is no way'. Use past 'there was no way' and past modal 'could' to match 'went'. Also the sentence is incomplete ending with 'and.' Remove the trailing 'and' and add 'then' for clarity. Suggestion: keep tenses consistent and finish the thought.

× Definitely yes. In my country bikes are most popular among kids and the youngsters as they enjoy writing, going to different places on on bikes and motorcycles so that they can enjoy the view.

✓ Definitely yes. In my country, bikes are most popular among kids and young people because they enjoy riding to different places on bikes and motorcycles and enjoying the scenery.

Problems: missing comma after 'country'; 'the youngsters' is awkward — use 'young people'; 'writing' is a typo for 'riding'; duplicated 'on on'; word order and phrase 'so that they can enjoy the view' is awkward. Also 'bikes are most popular' is acceptable but 'popular among' is better. Suggestion: correct typos, use 'riding', remove duplicate words, and improve word order.

× They can have a natural air surrounded by and also they enjoy that.

✓ They can enjoy the fresh air and the surrounding scenery, and they also enjoy that.

The phrase 'have a natural air surrounded by' is ungrammatical and confusing. Use 'enjoy the fresh air and the surrounding scenery' which is idiomatic. Also add 'and' appropriately: 'and they also enjoy that' or combine into one sentence. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'enjoy the fresh air' and 'surrounding scenery'.