Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think the bike is very popular.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且准确,但过于简短,缺乏细节和连贯支持句。建议在主题句后添加一两句具体细节(如什么时候有的、谁给的、常去哪儿骑或骑车的感受),并使用连接词使表达更自然。例如可用“when I was about…”, “so”, “because”等。注意不要超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it from my parents when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to school and to the park every day. Because it was lightweight, I felt very independent and happy to explore my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答简短且有轻微语法问题(定冠词使用不当),缺乏具体理由或例子。建议改用复合句并加入原因或例子(比如通勤、环保、运动等),使用连接词如“because”, “for example”, “so”来丰富内容并提高连贯性。保持不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see people riding to work or to run errands, and there are also dedicated bike lanes which encourage cycling.
× Yes, I think the bike is very popular.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular.
原句中使用了定冠词“the bike”,暗示特指某一辆自行车,但题目是在询问自行车这一类是否流行,因此应使用复数或不加定冠词来泛指整个类别。建议使用复数“bikes”或不加冠词的“bicycles”来表达一般事实。示例改正:"Yes, I think bikes are very popular." 或 "Yes, I think bicycles are very popular."