Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I lived in small city, people always take a bus or bikes. I'm not backing down when they go out so the bikes is very popular.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答太简短且缺乏细节。建议给出一个主题句后补充具体原因或背景,并用1–2个衔接词连接信息(例如because, so, when)。控制在最多5句话内。举例说明:说明为什么没有自行车(家庭、交通或兴趣原因)、是否羡慕同伴、是否后来拥有等。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't. When I was a child my family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school with my friends. Occasionally I borrowed a neighbour's bike, which made me wish I had my own.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答有观点但语法和表达不够清晰,且细节不具体。建议先给出明确主题句,再用衔接词(for example, because, so)补充具体原因和例子,纠正语法错误(如时态和短语)。可以提到城市类型、常见用途(通勤、休闲)、基础设施(自行车道)等具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular, especially in smaller cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes to work or market because public transport is infrequent and bike lanes are common.
× I lived in small city, people always take a bus or bikes.
✓ I lived in a small city; people always took the bus or rode bikes.
问题类型:名词单复数与冠词使用错误。解释:原句缺少不定冠词“a”,small city 应为 “a small city”。短语“take a bus or bikes”中“bus”需要与特定用法一致,通常说 “take the bus” 或 “take a bus”,而“bikes”与动词搭配不当,改为“rode bikes”更自然,且时态与前句“lived”保持一致(过去时)。建议:在可数名词单数前加冠词;描述过去习惯时动词用过去式;使用自然搭配如 “take the bus” 或 “ride/rode a bike(s)”。
× I'm not backing down when they go out so the bikes is very popular.
✓ I didn't go out with them, so bikes were very popular.
问题类型:第三人称单数及时态/句子结构错误。解释:原句“I’m not backing down when they go out”时态和表达不合适,不符合上下文(询问过去情况)。将其改为“I didn't go out with them”更符合过去背景。同时“the bikes is very popular”存在主谓不一致,bikes 为复数,谓语应为 were(或 are,如果谈一般事实)。因此改为“bikes were very popular”。建议:遵循时态一致(过去背景用过去式);复数名词搭配复数动词;用更自然的表达如 “go out with them”。
× Yes I do.
✓ Yes, I do.
问题类型:现在时使用(标点问题而非时态)。解释:句子本身时态正确(回答现在时的疑问),但缺少逗号使书写不自然。建议:在“Yes”后加逗号以符合书面习惯。