Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Tell Nisha the royal you don't see him through.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
You know, is it interesting?
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: The answer is not relevant or coherent to the question. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence, add one or two specific supporting details, and keep the reply natural and concise (no more than five sentences). Use linking words like "and" or "because" to connect ideas. Also avoid unrelated phrases and ensure grammar is correct.
Ví dụ: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because my parents took me to the park often, I became confident riding without the training wheels by the time I was seven.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: The answer is unclear and doesn't address the question. To improve, give a direct opinion in the first sentence and follow with 1–2 specific reasons or examples using linking words such as "because", "for example" or "however". Keep vocabulary relevant and sentences concise.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and shared-bike schemes, and in rural areas people often use bicycles for daily errands.
× Tell Nisha the royal you don't see him through.
✓ Tell Nisha that I don't see him through.
The original sentence is unclear and missing a conjunction. It appears the student intended to report speech to Nisha, so adding the conjunction 'that' makes the sentence complete and grammatical. Also 'the royal' is likely incorrect in context; if 'the royal' was unintended, replace it with the subject 'I'. If the intended meaning was different, rephrase clearly. Suggestion: use 'Tell Nisha that I don't see him through' or reword to the exact intended message.
× You know, is it interesting?
✓ Do you think bicycles are interesting?
The original reply is not a grammatically appropriate answer to 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' It lacks a clear subject and correct question structure. To respond about bikes, use a direct question form or a statement: 'Do you think bicycles are interesting?' or a statement: 'Yes, I think bicycles are popular because...' Ensure the subject ('you' or 'I') and verb form match the intended meaning.