Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I have no bike in a child. I have a toy.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Bullet. Royal Enfield Bullet.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 32.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity, give a direct topic sentence and one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct past tense and article use, and expand briefly (up to 5 sentences) with specific details like why you didn’t have one or what toy you had.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I had a small toy car that I played with at home. Because my family lived in a small apartment, there wasn’t much space to ride, so my parents preferred indoor toys. As a result, I learned to enjoy toys and indoor games rather than cycling.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 28.0

Gợi ý: Give a full sentence that answers the question directly and then add a specific reason or example using linking words. Avoid single-word replies or brand names alone; explain what you mean and who uses bikes and why.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think certain types of bikes are popular in my country, especially classic models like the Royal Enfield Bullet among enthusiasts. For daily commuting, however, many people prefer scooters and affordable motorbikes because they are cheaper and easier to handle in traffic. Therefore, popularity depends on purpose and income level.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× No, I have no bike in a child. I have a toy.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike as a child. I had a toy.

The student used incorrect tense and preposition. The question asked about past possession 'when you were a child', so use past tense 'didn't have' and 'had'. The phrase 'in a child' is incorrect; use 'as a child' or 'when I was a child' to indicate age. Also, 'I have' should be past 'I had' to match the time reference. Suggestion: Use 'as a child' or 'when I was a child' and match verbs to past tense (didn't have, had).

Sentence structure errors

× Bullet. Royal Enfield Bullet.

✓ Yes, many people like Royal Enfield Bullets.

The student's reply consists of sentence fragments and does not answer the question fluently. The examiner asked about popularity, so reply should be a complete sentence in present tense describing general truth: 'many people like...' or 'Bikes like the Royal Enfield Bullet are popular.' Suggestion: Use a full sentence that matches the question's present-tense context and clearly expresses opinion or fact.

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