Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: You communicated the basic idea, but there are several grammar and fluency issues. Improve by using correct past tense verbs, removing filler words (uh), and adding one or two specific supporting details linked clearly. Keep your answer natural and under five sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add when and with whom you rode and one brief detail about the experience.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was a child and I rode it almost every Sunday with my friend. We would cycle to the park, race each other, and sometimes stop for ice cream afterwards.

Gợi ý: The idea is understandable but the response is unclear and grammatically incorrect. To improve, give a direct opinion first, then support it with a clear reason and a specific example. Use correct sentence structure and link your ideas with expressions like 'because' or 'however'. Avoid repetition and keep it concise.

Ví dụ: Not really. In Vietnam most people prefer motorcycles because they are faster and easier to buy than bicycles. For example, many families use motorbikes to commute to work and school, especially in busy cities.

× Yes I did, uh, always.

✓ Yes, I did. I always did.

The original sentence mixes auxiliary 'did' with incorrect placement of 'always'. In past tense, frequency adverbs like 'always' should be placed before the main verb or after the auxiliary in a clear clause. Here separating into two short clauses 'Yes, I did. I always did.' or 'Yes, I always did.' corrects the tense and word order. Suggestion: Say 'Yes, I always did.' or 'Yes, I did. I always rode one.' depending on whether you include the verb.

× I go to ride by uh, every Sunday with my chill.

✓ I used to go riding every Sunday with my child.

The sentence uses present tense 'go to ride' when referring to a habitual past action. Use 'used to' for past habits. Also 'ride' as a noun/activity takes the -ing form 'riding'. 'Chill' is likely a misspelling of 'child'. Preposition 'by' is unnecessary. Suggestion: Use 'I used to go riding every Sunday with my child.' or 'I used to ride my bike every Sunday with my child.'.

× For me I don't know because my my country is Vietnamese everyone on our way use use motorcycle better more to buy.

✓ I'm not sure. In my country, Vietnam, most people prefer to use motorcycles instead of bicycles.

This sentence has multiple structural problems: repetition ('my my'), incorrect noun phrase 'my country is Vietnamese' (should be 'In my country, Vietnam,'), incorrect preposition 'on our way', duplicated verb 'use use', and awkward comparative 'better more to buy'. The intended meaning is that most people in Vietnam use motorcycles rather than bicycles. Suggestion: Break into two sentences for clarity and use 'most people prefer to use motorcycles instead of bicycles.'