Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Well I have a bike when was 5 or 6 years old and I was usually ride a bike just ride around the garden for every day and I really enjoy it.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Well, I think bike are very popular in my country because in 1970s or 1980s they had a bike alcohol in my country China, and at that time people usually ride a bike to go to school and go to work.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 注意时态一致和语法结构,开头用过去时表述过去的经历;句子应更简洁自然,并使用连接词使细节连贯。可以把信息分成主题句和一到两句支持细节,避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was about five or six. I used to ride it every day around our garden, which I really enjoyed because it made me feel free and helped me learn balance quickly.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更准确并注意用词(如“bike culture”或“bicycles”),避免不明词汇(例:'bike alcohol' 非常不恰当)。提供具体原因并用连接词组织句子,时态和年代信息应表达清楚。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles have been very popular in China for decades. In the 1970s and 1980s there was a strong bicycle culture, and many people relied on bikes to commute to school and work, though nowadays more people use cars and public transport.
× Well I have a bike when was 5 or 6 years old and I was usually ride a bike just ride around the garden for every day and I really enjoy it.
✓ Well, I had a bike when I was 5 or 6 years old. I usually rode it around the garden every day, and I really enjoyed it.
问题类型:现在时/过去时使用不当(应使用过去时描述过去的经历)。说明:原句混用了现在时“have”和一般过去时“was”,并且动词时态和形式不一致(如“was usually ride”)。建议:描述过去的经历时整句使用一般过去时。把“have”改为“had”,“I usually rode it”代替“was usually ride a bike”,并把“enjoy”改为过去式“enjoyed”。同时把长句拆成两句,添加必要的代词(it)和逗号以提高可读性。
× Well, I think bike are very popular in my country because in 1970s or 1980s they had a bike alcohol in my country China, and at that time people usually ride a bike to go to school and go to work.
✓ Well, I think bikes are very popular in my country because in the 1970s and 1980s bicycles were common in China, and at that time people usually rode bikes to go to school and to work.
问题类型:主谓一致与数的一致性、以及时态/用词错误。说明:原句中“bike are”应为复数名词“bikes are”或不可数表达;时间前缺少定冠词“the 1970s”;“had a bike alcohol”表达错误且不可理解,应改为“bicycles were common”或类似表达;描述过去的习惯应使用过去时“rode”。建议:将“bike”改为复数“bikes”,在年代前加“the”,用“were common”替换不清楚的短语,并把“ride”改为过去式“rode”。