Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, almost everyone have a bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答太简短,缺乏细节和结构。建议:先用一句主题句直接回答,然后用1–2句补充具体细节(例如什么时候得到的、用来做什么、有无特别记忆)。使用连接词如“because”或“so”使表达更连贯。注意语法和自然表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight years old, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because our neighborhood had quiet streets, I felt safe riding alone and I have many fond memories of those days.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 语法和细节需要改进。建议:先给出直接回答,然后用一到两句具体说明原因或举例,并注意主谓一致和适当词汇(例如“almost everyone has a bike”)。可使用连接词如“because”或“for example”增强逻辑。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students and shopkeepers often cycle to school or work since it is cheap and convenient.
× Yes, almost everyone have a bike.
✓ Yes, almost everyone has a bike.
语法问题类型ID:27(主谓一致错误)。 错误原因:句子主语“everyone”是一个不定代词,语法上被视为单数,所以谓语动词必须用第三人称单数形式“has”。原句使用了复数动词“have”,与单数主语不一致。 改进建议:遇到 everyone、someone、nobody 等不定代词时,谓语动词要用第三人称单数形式。可在心里将 everyone 替换为“每个人(he/she)”来判断动词形式。例如:Everyone has a bike. 如果想使用复数意思,可改写为 “Almost all people have bikes.”