Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I had a bike when I AM 60 year old my dad gave me.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
My country back are popular.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 32.0Gợi ý: 回答时时态和细节有明显错误,要直接回应“小时候有没有”的问题。注意使用过去时或过去完成时,句子不宜太长且保持自然流畅。可以先用一句主题句说明有或没有,然后给出简短的补充细节(谁给的、什么时候、什么样的自行车)。避免写作式大写和语法错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me for my tenth birthday, and it was a red mountain bike that I rode every afternoon around the neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法混乱,需要直接表达观点并给出具体理由或例子。使用简单清晰的句型:先给出观点(是或不是),然后用一两句支持说明,例如提到城市骑行文化、共享单车或交通状况。注意主谓一致和词序。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use shared bikes for short trips in cities, and cycling lanes have become more common, making riding safer and more convenient.
× I had a bike when I AM 60 year old my dad gave me.
✓ I had a bike when I was 6 years old; my dad gave it to me.
错误类型:过去时错误和平行结构混乱。说明:原句中“AM”使用现在时大写且错误,应该使用过去时“was”。数字“60”明显不合句意,推测为“6”。同时句子结构混乱,需把两部分用分号或连词连成清晰句子,并用代词“it”代替前文的“bike”。建议:使用正确的过去时态(was),注意数字书写(6 years old),并将句子分成两部分或用连接词使意思明确。
× My country back are popular.
✓ Bicycles are popular in my country.
错误类型:句子结构错误、主谓不一致及词序问题。说明:原句词序和词汇选择都不合逻辑,“My country back”不是正确表达,应表达“在我国家里,自行车很受欢迎”。需要明确主语(Bicycles 或 They)和正确的谓语(are popular),并使用介词短语“in my country”表示地点。建议:使用完整主谓结构,如 “Bicycles are popular in my country.” 或 “They are popular in my country.”