Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details. Use contractions and vary vocabulary to sound more fluent. For example, say you never owned one and give a short reason or consequence. Avoid repeating words and keep to at most 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a small apartment and there wasn’t space to keep one, so I never learned how to ride. I sometimes wished I could join friends who cycled to school.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details and a reason. Remove hesitations and repeated words. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore, for instance) to make your answer coherent. Be specific about who uses bikes and why (cost, convenience, traffic). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people—including students, workers and some elderly—use bicycles because they are cheap and help avoid traffic. As a result, cycling is a common and practical way to get around in cities.

× No, I did not have a bike when I was a kid. I do not know how to ride a bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a kid. I did not learn how to ride a bike.

The second sentence mixes present simple 'do not know' with past context established by 'did not have' and 'when I was a kid'. This creates a tense inconsistency (Grammar problem type ID 6: Present tense issue and 5: Past tense issue). The idea refers to a past ability or experience, so use past tense 'did not learn' or 'I couldn't ride a bike then.' Suggestion: keep the past timeframe by using past tense verbs when describing past experiences (e.g., 'I did not learn how to ride a bike' or 'I couldn't ride a bike').

× Extremely the the bikes are very popular in my country and most of the people including the the elderly and also the guys basically the men of the country basically use bikes for travelling because it will save.

✓ Bikes are extremely popular in my country, and most people, including the elderly and men, use bikes for travel because it saves money.

Multiple problems: repeated words ('the the'), unnecessary fillers ('extremely' mispositioned, 'basically', 'also', 'the guys'), article misuse ('the bikes' is unnecessary when speaking generally), and an incomplete clause 'because it will save' lacking an object. This is primarily Sentence structure errors (ID 26) and Article errors (ID 22). Also issues with word choice/adverb placement (ID 20 and 13). To correct: remove duplicates and fillers, place 'extremely' before 'popular' or use 'are extremely popular', drop 'the' when generalizing ('Bikes are...'), simplify and clarify the reason with an object ('saves money' or 'saves costs'). Use commas to separate clauses and reduce redundancy.