Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: This answer does not respond to the examiner's question. For Part 1 you should answer directly with a topic sentence (yes/no or short phrase) and then add one or two brief supporting details. Keep it natural and relevant, avoid asking the examiner to change the question. Use linking words if you add details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I used almost every day to ride to my friend’s house. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I felt more independent and spent a lot of time practicing new tricks.

Gợi ý: The answer attempts to respond but is unclear, repetitive and full of hesitations. Improve clarity by giving a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, so). Reduce repetition and filler words, and use more precise vocabulary (commute, affordable, common). Keep to no more than five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances. For example, they are affordable and convenient in crowded cities, so lots of students and workers prefer cycling. In addition, there are several bike lanes in major towns which makes cycling safer.

× So can you ask me some new question?

✓ Can you ask me a new question?

The original sentence has awkward word order and an extra modal-like 'so' that is unnecessary. This is a sentence structure issue (ID 26). Remove 'So' at the beginning and use the correct article 'a' before 'new question' to form a natural request: 'Can you ask me a new question?'. Also ensure the verb and object order is correct (modal + subject + base verb + object).

× Uh, yeah, I think, uh, it's very popular in my country because they went, they went to go one place to another one another one.

✓ Uh, yeah, I think bikes are very popular in my country because people use them to go from one place to another.

This sentence mixes past and present and uses incorrect pronouns and repetitions. The main idea is a general present fact, so use present tense 'are' and 'use' (ID 6). Replace 'they' (unclear) with 'people' and correct the verb phrase: 'use them to go from one place to another.' Remove repeated phrases 'they went, they went' and 'another one'. This produces a clear, grammatically correct sentence in present tense.

× And it's very easy to, umm, for, for others.

✓ And it's very easy for others to use.

The original places 'for' incorrectly and has an incomplete clause. This is an incorrect use/order of prepositions (ID 11). In English, the structure should be 'easy for [people] to [verb]': 'easy for others to use.' Move 'for others' before the infinitive and include the verb 'use' to complete the idea.

× And there was some ride and.

✓ There are also some bike rental services.

The fragment 'And there was some ride and.' is incomplete and unclear, a sentence structure error (ID 26). Decide the intended meaning (likely that there are rides or rental options) and rewrite as a complete sentence in present tense to match the general statement: 'There are also some bike rental services.' This uses correct subject-verb agreement and completes the thought.