Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct minor grammar/word choice errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct: "one of my hobbies" and say "when I was about five". Avoid redundancy like "I did have" when "Yes, I had" is enough.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I started riding it when I was about five, and I practiced every weekend, which turned it into one of my favourite hobbies.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, sentence structure and coherence. Use linking words (however, although, for example) and correct plural/singular forms: "they like", "a means of transport", "to get to work". Offer one clear comparison and a specific reason or example. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Bicycles are fairly popular in my country, although not as common as in places like Switzerland. For example, many people ride bikes for leisure or exercise, but few use them as a regular means of transport to get to work.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Using 'did have' is grammatically correct but unnecessary and unnatural in a simple past affirmative sentence. The simple past 'had' is standard for completed actions in the past. Suggestion: use 'I had' for concise natural speech.

× I started to ride a bike around 5 years old and since then it's become one of my hobby.

✓ I started riding a bike at around five years old and since then it has become one of my hobbies.

Multiple issues: 'started to ride' is acceptable but 'started riding' (verb + -ing) is more natural for habitual actions (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'Around 5 years old' needs 'at' before age and numbers in text form are preferred in speech transcripts. 'It's become' should be 'it has become' (present perfect to connect past start to present). 'One of my hobby' has a singular/plural mismatch; use plural 'hobbies' (Singular and plural issue, Type 1). Suggestion: use present perfect 'has become', '-ing' after 'started', 'at around five years old', and plural 'hobbies'.

× Yes, it's very popular, but not as much as in other country for example like in Switzerland, umm in my country people likes to ride a bike as a hobby, but it's not one of the transport which they use to get to job or.

✓ Yes, they are very popular, but not as much as in other countries, for example Switzerland. In my country, people like to ride bikes as a hobby, but it is not a common mode of transport for getting to work.

This sentence contains several tense and agreement issues: 'it's very popular' refers to bikes (plural) so use 'they are' (Subject-verb agreement, Type 27). 'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' (Singular and plural issue, Type 1). 'For example like' is redundant; use 'for example' (Incorrect conjunction/use, Type 16). 'People likes' is wrong: 'people' is plural so use 'like' (Third person singular issue, Type 2). 'Ride a bike' is acceptable but 'ride bikes' matches plural subject. 'Not one of the transport' is ungrammatical; use 'not a common mode of transport' or 'not one of the means of transport' (Sentence structure/article issues, Types 26 and 22). 'To get to job' should be 'to get to work' (Incorrect preposition/word choice, Type 11). Suggestion: make subject-verb agreement consistent, pluralize nouns where needed, remove redundancies, and use natural expressions like 'mode of transport' and 'get to work'.