Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and directly answers the question, with several supporting reasons. To improve, make the response more concise (avoid repetition), reduce filler words (e.g., 'umm'), and use smoother linking phrases to connect ideas. Also correct small grammar issues (use 'ride a bike' and 'balance on a bike'), and aim to keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example, begin with a topic sentence, then provide 1–2 specific supporting details and a brief concluding remark.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I was afraid of riding. I never learned how to balance on a bike, so my parents decided it was safer not to buy one. As a result, I only started learning to ride much later.

Gợi ý: This is a good, relevant response with a clear opinion and an example. To improve, avoid vague phrases like 'many other reasons' and repeated wording ('riding bike' → 'riding bikes'). Use linking words to connect your general statement and example (e.g., 'for instance', 'in addition'), and add a brief specific reason why bikes are popular (cost, convenience, environment). Keep it concise (3–4 sentences) and finish with a short conclusion.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For instance, a couple next door often cycle with their young son to do the shopping. In addition, many people prefer cycling to avoid traffic and save money on petrol.

× I never learned how to balance on bike, nor did I, umm, learn how to ride one properly.

✓ I never learned how to balance on a bike, nor did I learn how to ride one properly.

The preposition/article combination is incorrect: 'on bike' is missing the article 'a'. Use 'on a bike' or better 'balance on a bike'. Also remove filler 'umm' in formal speech. Suggestion: include the indefinite article before singular countable nouns and avoid unnecessary fillers.

× I believe yes, mainly because I see a lot of people riding bike to commute or to go shopping or for many other reasons.

✓ I believe so, mainly because I see a lot of people riding bikes to commute, to go shopping, or for many other reasons.

Pronoun 'yes' is awkward here; 'believe so' is more natural. Also 'riding bike' lacks plural or article; use 'riding bikes' (general statement) or 'riding a bike'. Parallel structure: use consistent infinitive forms and add commas. Suggestion: use 'so' after 'believe' and make the noun plural for general habits.

× For example, a few days ago I met a couple living next door and they're riding a bike with their young boy to go shopping.

✓ For example, a few days ago I met a couple living next door and they were riding a bike with their young boy to go shopping.

Tense consistency problem combined with singular/plural: 'they're riding a bike' mixes present progressive with past reference 'a few days ago'. Use past progressive 'they were riding' to match time. 'A bike' is acceptable; no plural needed here because referring to the family's bike. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time adverbial and use past progressive for an ongoing action in the past.

× They told me that bike is a great tool to go.

✓ They told me that a bike is a great way to get around.

The sentence is grammatically awkward and unidiomatic. 'That bike is a great tool to go' lacks an article and uses an inappropriate noun and infinitive. Use 'a bike' and an idiomatic phrase such as 'a great way to get around' or 'a great way to travel/commute'. Suggestion: choose natural collocations and include articles with singular countable nouns.