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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did have.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in uh, in our, in my country, cause uh, the most of the kids the these days teenagers is umm, they make bikes like habits or maybe like their fashion.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and complete by giving a brief topic sentence and one supporting detail. Avoid extra words like 'did' after 'Yes' and aim for 1–2 sentences. For example, mention what kind of bike it was or how you used it to add specificity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that I used to ride around my neighborhood every afternoon.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, also). Reduce hesitations and grammatical errors (use plural/singular correctly). Be concise — aim for 2–3 sentences with clear vocabulary like 'trend' or 'transport'.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many teenagers use them for short trips and as a fashion trend. For example, electric bikes and colorful custom bikes are common among young people.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes, I did have.

Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' uses the past simple auxiliary 'did'. In short answers, the main verb is dropped and only the auxiliary 'did' is used for affirmation. Saying 'I did have' is not strictly wrong but sounds redundant; the natural, concise response is 'Yes, I did.' Suggestion: Use 'Yes, I did.' for short past-simple answers or 'Yes, I had.' as a full-sentence alternative.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in uh, in our, in my country, cause uh, the most of the kids the these days teenagers is umm, they make bikes like habits or maybe like their fashion.

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most kids and teenagers these days make riding bikes a habit or even a fashion.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect articles and determiners ('the most of the kids the these days' is ungrammatical), subject-verb agreement ('teenagers ... is' should be 'teenagers ... are'), word choice ('make bikes like habits' is awkward), and colloquial fillers. According to the allowed correction types, the primary problems are subject-verb agreement and article/determiner misuse. Specific problems and suggestions: use 'most kids and teenagers' instead of 'the most of the kids the these days', change 'is' to 'are' to agree with the plural 'teenagers', replace 'make bikes like habits' with 'make riding bikes a habit', and use 'because' instead of 'cause' in formal speech. Also remove hesitation fillers like 'uh' and 'umm'. Suggestion: Say 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most kids and teenagers these days make riding bikes a habit or even a fashion.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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