Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it it's very popular and it's useful.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 在回答中你直接回答了问题,但内容过于简短、缺乏细节和连贯性。可以增加一到两句具体细节(比如自行车的样子、你如何使用它或一次难忘的经历),并用连接词使回答更流畅。例如加入时间、地点或感受来丰富回答,同时保持不超过5句话。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I rode it to school almost every day. I remember practicing for weeks until I could ride without training wheels, which made me feel very proud.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答太简短且有语法或重复小错误("it it's")。应直接给出观点后,用一到两句具体原因或例子支持论点并使用连接词(例如 'because', 'for example', 'so')。可以说明在城市交通、环保或锻炼方面的作用,使回答更具体和有说服力。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work in the city, and cycling is also encouraged as a healthy and eco-friendly way to travel.
× Yes, I think it it's very popular and it's useful.
✓ Yes, I think it's very popular and it's useful.
句子中出现了多余的“it”,写成“it it's”是重复。根据第三人称单数缩写用法,应使用“it's”表示“it is/it has”,但不能把“it”与“it's”连写。改为“it's very popular”即可。建议写作时检查是否把代词和缩写重复写出。