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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I I had a bike when I was 18. The bike is a gift from my father.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Absolutely. In my country many young people like like riding bike and like have a bicycle trip travel.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 在回答中注意时间与身份的一致性并减少重复,同时扩展细节以使回答更自然有说服力。比如纠正“child”和“18岁”的矛盾;使用一到两句补充说明关于自行车的类型、用途或与父亲的关系。注意避免重复词(如“I I”)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a teenager. It was an old mountain bike my father gave me for my 18th birthday, and I used it to commute to school and explore nearby trails.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更流利且语法准确,避免词汇重复(如“like like”)和词序错误。提供具体原因或例子来支持观点,例如流行的骑行活动、城市骑行道或环保与健康原因。使用连接词(because, for example)使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. Bicycles are very popular, especially among young people, because they are cheap and healthy; for example, many cities have dedicated bike lanes and organised weekend cycling tours.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes, I I had a bike when I was 18.

Yes, I had a bike when I was 18.

句子中的重复“I I”是书写/口误造成的多余词,不属于语法类型清单,但会影响正确表达。去掉多余的“I”即可。此句时态为过去时,结构正确,保持过去时。建议:写作或答题时检查是否有重复单词,朗读能帮助发现并改正此类错误。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× The bike is a gift from my father.

The bike was a gift from my father.

原句使用现在时“is”与前句“I had a bike”过去时态不一致。既然说的是过去得到的礼物,应使用过去时“was”。这属于时态一致性问题(在给定清单中归为“Incorrect use of the definite article”不完全贴切,但根据清单必须选择一个,选择与定冠词相关条目)。建议:叙述过去发生的事情时,保持全句时态一致,使用过去时态动词。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Absolutely. In my country many young people like like riding bike and like have a bicycle trip travel.

Absolutely. In my country, many young people like riding bikes and like having bicycle trips.

原句有多处问题:1) “like like”重复,应删除重复词;2) “riding bike”缺少复数或冠词,惯用表达为“riding bikes”;3) “like have a bicycle trip travel”结构错误且有多余单词“travel”。应使用动名词短语“like having bicycle trips”或“like going on bicycle trips”。这些问题涉及复数/冠词使用、动词形式(动名词)和多余词。建议:a) 避免重复词;b) 表达喜好后接动名词(like + -ing);c) 车辆通常用复数表示一般情况(riding bikes);d) 简化短语,使用固定搭配如“go on bicycle trips/ride bicycles”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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