Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do because in my country, especially in my city, a lot of, uh, teenagers and also kids are uh, rider bikes and uh, I can't say that it's more comfortable, uh, when you a child and you can just use it every day.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Ответ короткий и понятный, но можно улучшить его, добавив короткое объяснение или контраст, чтобы показать беглость и развернутость. Постарайтесь избегать лишних пауз и звуков (например, "uh"). Используйте простое связующее слово, если даёте дополнительную информацию.
Ví dụ: No, I didn't. I couldn't afford one as a child, so I usually walked to school or used public transport instead.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: Ответ содержит полезную информацию, но страдает от повтора, пауз и грамматических ошибок. Надо организовать ответ: дать главную мысль, затем 1–2 конкретных аргумента с логическими связками, избегая междометий и сокращений. Уточните, что имеете в виду под "комфортом" и приведите пример использования велосипедов (например, поездки в школу или для отдыха).
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular, especially among children and teenagers. For example, in my city many students ride to school because it's cheap and convenient, and families often use bikes for weekend recreation.
× a lot of, uh, teenagers and also kids are uh, rider bikes
✓ a lot of teenagers and kids ride bikes
The original uses 'are rider bikes', which incorrectly combines the auxiliary 'are' with a noun 'rider' instead of the verb 'ride' in correct form. Use the base verb 'ride' for present simple with plural subjects: 'teenagers and kids ride bikes'. Suggestion: use subject + base verb for habitual actions.
× when you a child and you can just use it every day
✓ when you were a child and you could just use it every day
The clause refers to a past time ('when you ... a child') so verbs must be in past tense. The original omits 'were' and keeps 'can' (present modal). Correct forms are 'were' for 'be' with second person singular in past and 'could' as past of 'can'. Suggestion: match past reference times with past tense verbs.