Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike before.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Definitely, bike is very popular in my country. Actually in China most of the people able to ride a bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短,缺乏细节和流畅性。建议在开头用一到两句主题句直接回答,然后用一到两句补充细节(如什么时候、什么样的自行车、与谁一起骑或记忆),并使用连接词使回答更连贯。注意时态与表达自然性,例如用“I had a bike when I was a child”比“I had a bike before”更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle with a bell, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood with my friends every afternoon.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确但有语法和表达问题,句子略显笨拙且缺乏具体支持。建议先给出主题句,然后用一两句具体细节、原因或例子支持观点,使用连接词(for example, because, so)并注意主谓一致与自然表达(例如“bikes are popular”而不是“bike is very popular”,“most people are able to ride a bike”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many people use shared bikes for short trips in cities, and learning to ride a bicycle is a common childhood experience.
× Definitely, bike is very popular in my country.
✓ Definitely, bikes are very popular in my country.
这里存在单数与复数不一致的问题。中文解释:当指代某一类事物时(如“自行车”作为一种交通工具的总体),应使用复数形式“bikes”或用定冠词与单数可数名词(the bike)来泛指。原句用单数“bike”不符合英语习惯。建议:谈论一类事物时用复数(bikes)或用不定代词/定冠词视上下文。
× Actually in China most of the people able to ride a bike.
✓ Actually, in China most people are able to ride a bike.
这里是句子结构错误并缺少系动词。中文解释:原句缺少系动词“are”,并且“most of the people”在此处可简化为“most people”。正确结构应为“most people are able to...”。建议:注意完整主谓结构,使用“be + able to”表示“能够”。