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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, because I am a girl.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bike is most popular in our country. Many boys and girls use these uh bike because they uh, go their Distin distance destination umm by.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 28.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct but natural answer and avoid irrelevant or biased reasons. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly explain the real reason if needed. Use 1–2 supporting sentences with specific detail and linking words. For example, say whether you had one and explain why not (e.g., family choice, cost, safety), rather than saying "because I am a girl."

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on busy roads, so they preferred I walk or use public transport instead.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 46.0

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence then add specific supporting details using linking words and cleaner language. Avoid filler words and correct grammar (use plural forms and clearer reasons). Mention where bikes are popular, who uses them, and why (cost, convenience, environment) with a concise example or comparison.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many students and workers use bicycles to commute because they are cheap and can avoid traffic, and in smaller towns people prefer bikes for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, because I am a girl.

No, because I was a girl.

The question asks about having a bike when you were a child, which sets the time frame in the past. The pronoun 'I' is fine, but the verb tense should match the past time reference. Change the present 'am' to past 'was' to be consistent: 'I was a girl.' Also consider a more natural reply: 'No, I didn't, because I was a girl.'

Plural and article errors (Singular and plural issue / Article errors)

× Yes, I think bike is most popular in our country.

Yes, I think bikes are the most popular in our country.

The noun 'bike' is countable and refers generally to the category, so it should be plural 'bikes.' When stating that something is the most popular among options, use the definite article 'the' before 'most popular.' So correct to 'bikes are the most popular.'

Singular and plural issue

× Many boys and girls use these uh bike because they uh, go their Distin distance destination umm by.

Many boys and girls use these bikes because they go to their distant destinations by them.

Several problems: 'these uh bike' mixes plural demonstrative 'these' with singular 'bike'—use plural 'bikes.' 'Distin distance destination' is fragmented; use 'distant destinations.' The verb phrase 'go their ... by' is missing prepositions and objects: say 'go to their distant destinations by them' or better 'get to their destinations by bike.' Also 'they' refers to people, so 'by them' is acceptable but 'by bike' is more natural. Suggested improved version: 'Many boys and girls use bikes to get to their destinations.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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