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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because my school was about a 15 minute walk from home. I often rode my bike to get there and save time.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are really popular in my country especially recent year because there are a lot of sharing bikes on the street and you can easily to get a bike. Also bike is really convenient and using a bike is more cheaper than driving.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答直接且清楚,但可改进的地方包括:1) 简化并自然表达(避免冗长的连词);2) 使用更地道的短语(如“about a 15-minute walk”中的连字符和更自然的时态);3) 添加一两句具体细节或感受以丰富内容。注意不要超过五句。举例:先一句主题句,然后一两句具体细节或感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My school was about a 15-minute walk from home so I often rode my bike to save time. It was quicker than walking and I enjoyed the fresh air on the way to school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答内容完整但有语法和表达问题:1) 修正时态与搭配(如“especially in recent years”,“easy to get”);2) 精简重复信息并用连接词使逻辑更连贯;3) 提供更具体的例子或原因(例如环保、节省时间、城市交通拥堵)。保持最多五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes have become very popular in recent years, mainly because of the bike-sharing schemes. They're easy to find on the street and are more convenient and cheaper than driving, especially for short trips in busy city areas.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× there are a lot of sharing bikes on the street and you can easily to get a bike.

there are a lot of shared bikes on the street and you can easily get a bike.

问题类型:复数/单复数与词形搭配错误,以及动词不定式多余的“to”。“sharing bikes”在此处不如“shared bikes(共享单车)”自然;另外“easily to get”中不应在情态/副词后加不定式的“to”,正确用法是“easily get”。建议:将“sharing”改为表示被共享状态的过去分词形式“shared”,并删除“to”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Also bike is really convenient and using a bike is more cheaper than driving.

Also bikes are really convenient, and using a bike is cheaper than driving.

问题类型:形容词/副词使用错误和主谓一致问题。1) “Also bike is”中应使用复数“bikes are”以配合泛指;2) “more cheaper”是冗余比较级错误,不能同时使用“more”和比较级词尾“-er”。正确为“cheaper”。建议:把单数改复数以泛指所有自行车,去掉“more”。

Present tense issue

× Yes, I think bikes are really popular in my country especially recent year because there are a lot of sharing bikes on the street and you can easily to get a bike.

Yes, I think bikes have been really popular in my country, especially in recent years, because there are a lot of shared bikes on the street and you can easily get a bike.

问题类型:时态使用错误。“especially recent year”与句中一般现在时不匹配,表示最近这段时间应使用现在完成时或现在完成进行时(have been popular),并且短语应为“in recent years”。建议:用“have been”表从过去到现在持续的状态,并把“recent year”改为复数短语“recent years”。

There be issue

× I often rode my bike to get there and save time.

I often rode my bike to get there and save time.

该句在语法上没有明显违反所给问题类型列表的错误。句子时态为过去(rode),后半句省略了过去式标记但在口语中可接受。若需严格一致,可改为“I often rode my bike to get there and saved time.” 表示过去习惯性动作时一致使用过去式。建议(可选):将“save”改为“saved”以保持时态一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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