Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, because it's, uh, very popular exercise.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答太简短,缺乏细节和结构。应先用主题句直接回答,然后补充具体细节(如什么时候有、是谁给的、使用频率或印象)。使用连接词使回答更连贯,同时控制在不超过5句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, which my parents bought for me as a birthday present. I rode it almost every day after school around the neighborhood, and it helped me feel independent and confident. Overall, it was one of my favorite childhood possessions.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答有观点但表达含糊且不够具体。应先直接回应,然后用具体原因和例子支持观点,避免犹豫词(如 "uh"),使用连接词(例如 because, for example, so)增强连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for exercise and short trips. For example, in cities you can see lots of cyclists in parks and on dedicated bike lanes, and many schools also encourage children to ride for fitness. As a result, cycling has become both a healthy hobby and a practical way to travel.
× Yes, because it's, uh, very popular exercise.
✓ Yes, because it's a very popular form of exercise.
问题类型ID: 13(Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs)以及 22(Article errors)。原句中缺少不定冠词“a”,而且搭配更自然的表达是“a very popular form of exercise”或直接说“very popular”前加名词或短语修饰。建议在可数名词前使用适当的冠词或改用不可数/短语结构:例如“a very popular form of exercise”或“very popular in my country”。这些表达更符合英语习惯。