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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are popular in our country. We use it every day and we are and we are going to the beach, to the market, to the grocery and everything we do, we always use bike.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Correct the tense and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one brief supporting detail (reason or memory). Use one or two linking words if adding detail. Keep it within 1–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to visit friends and explore my neighborhood almost every afternoon, which helped me become more independent.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Make the response more fluent and eliminate repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give 2 specific examples of common uses. Use linking words like "for example" or "such as" and correct singular/plural and article use.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them to commute to work or school, and others ride to the market or the beach because they are cheap and convenient.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple ('do have') with a past time marker ('when I was a child'). Use past simple ('had') to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use 'had' for possession in the past.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, bikes are popular in our country. We use it every day and we are and we are going to the beach, to the market, to the grocery and everything we do, we always use bike.

Yes, bikes are popular in our country. We use them every day; we go to the beach, to the market, to the grocery store, and we always use bikes for everything.

There are several agreement and word-choice issues: 'bikes' is plural so the pronoun should be 'them' (subject-verb agreement/pronoun use). 'We are and we are going' is redundant and incorrect; simple present 'we go' is appropriate for habitual actions. 'To the grocery' should be 'to the grocery store' and 'use bike' should be 'use bikes' to match plural. Suggestions: match plural nouns with plural pronouns, remove redundant 'are', use simple present for habitual routines, and use natural collocations like 'grocery store'.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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