Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I didn't have a bite when I was a child because in my family we often go to the subway or walked outside so we not really need.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
But in our country are very popular, almost everybody will use it to go out.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接并且语法正确。注意单词拼写(bike 不是 bite),时态和主谓一致(过去时:we went/walked)。句子不应太长且要包含一到两句具体细节。可以先用主题句直接回答,再用一两句说明原因或举例来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family usually used the subway or walked, so we didn’t need one. For example, my school was only a ten-minute walk from home, which made a bike unnecessary.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 注意句子开头不要用不必要的连词(例如 But),并确保句子完整(主语和谓语)。回答时先给出明确观点,然后用具体细节或对比支持观点(如使用人群、场合、交通或环境原因)。可使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Almost everyone uses them for short trips, especially students and workers in cities, because they are cheap and convenient.
× I didn't have a bite when I was a child because in my family we often go to the subway or walked outside so we not really need.
✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because in my family we often went to the subway or walked outside so we didn't really need one.
错误包括几个过去时和词汇拼写问题:1) “bite” 是拼写错误,正确应为 “bike”。2) 句子叙述的是过去的情况,动词需要用过去式:将“go”改为“went”,并把“not really need”改为过去式“didn't really need”。3) 最后缺少不定代词“one”来替代“a bike”。改进建议:检查词汇拼写,注意句子时态一致性(整句都用过去时),在需要替代前文名词时使用“one”。
× But in our country are very popular, almost everybody will use it to go out.
✓ But bikes are very popular in our country; almost everybody uses them to go out.
主要问题是现在时的主谓结构和代词形式:1) 句子缺少主语,应该明确为“Bikes are very popular”。2) 第二部分描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时,将“will use”改为“uses”并与复数主语匹配为“them”。3) 原句信息衔接不顺,建议用分号或连词分隔两部分。改进建议:写一般事实或习惯时用一般现在时,确保主语清楚并使动词与主语在人称和数上保持一致;代指复数名词时用复数代词(them)。