Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời rõ ràng nhưng cần rút gọn, sửa ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sửa thì động từ cho nhất quán (quá khứ), và bổ sung một chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn về cảm xúc hoặc kỷ niệm để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn. Tránh tiếng “Uh” và lặp lại như “I think, I think”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a pink bike when I was in secondary school, and I rode it to school almost every day. I loved that bike because it made me feel independent and I often raced my friends on the way home.

Gợi ý: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc và từ vựng chưa mạch lạc; có lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt lặp. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ (for example, because, so) để liên kết ý, sửa cụm từ như “original bike” và tránh từ thừa như “like”. Bổ sung một ví dụ cụ thể hoặc số liệu nếu có để thuyết phục hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Besides traditional bicycles, many people use motorbikes because they are personal and convenient; for example, motorbikes help avoid heavy traffic and are cheaper to run than cars.

× Uh, my dad bought me a pink bike when I was attending to secondary school and I remember I used to ride that bike every day to go to school.

✓ Uh, my dad bought me a pink bike when I was attending secondary school and I remember I used to ride that bike every day to go to school.

The phrase 'attending to secondary school' is incorrect because 'attend' does not require 'to' when followed by a school or event. Use 'attend secondary school' to indicate past attendance. Suggestion: remove 'to' after 'attending'. The rest of the sentence correctly uses past simple ('bought') and 'used to' for past habitual actions.

× Uh, I think, I think I use it almost every day with that bike.

✓ Uh, I think I used it almost every day.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I think' with present simple 'I use' while referring to a past habit. Because the context is past (childhood), the verb should be past: 'I used it.' Also 'with that bike' is unnecessary and awkward; remove it. Suggestion: use past tense for habitual past actions and keep clauses concise.

× I think yes, because not only like the original bike, my country also use a lot of motorbikes.

✓ I think so, because besides traditional bicycles, my country also uses a lot of motorbikes.

Problems: 'I think yes' is unnatural—use 'I think so'. 'Not only like the original bike' is unclear; use 'besides traditional bicycles'. Subject-verb agreement: 'my country also use' should be 'my country also uses' because 'country' is singular. Suggestion: restructure the sentence for clarity and correct verb agreement.

× It is personal and it is convenient.

✓ They are personal and convenient.

Referring to motorbikes (plural), use plural pronoun 'they' and omit the second 'it is'. Also 'personal' and 'convenient' are fine as adjectives. Suggestion: ensure pronoun number matches the noun being described.

× We don't have to like have a jammed traffic using cars, so we use motorbikes instead.

✓ We don't have to get stuck in heavy traffic using cars, so we use motorbikes instead.

The original uses filler 'like' and awkward noun phrase 'have a jammed traffic'. Use the verb phrase 'get stuck in heavy traffic' which is natural. Also 'using cars' is acceptable but placing 'using cars' after 'traffic' is awkward; rephrasing clarifies meaning. Suggestion: remove filler words, use natural collocations ('heavy traffic', 'get stuck'), and keep sentence concise.