Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did I have your back when you were child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Maybe our country, there were so many people like riding back.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: 回答存在严重理解和表达错误。首先没有直接回答问题,复述错误(把“bike”听成“your back”),句子语法也不正确。改进建议: 1) 仔细听清问题关键词(如 bike, child),确认意思后再回答; 2) 直接用一句话给出明确回答(肯定或否定),然后用最多两句补充具体细节或原因,控制在5句内; 3) 注意主谓一致和时态(过去式)以及代词用法。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red bicycle that I rode to school and around my neighborhood. I loved fixing its chain with my father, which made me more confident riding it.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不流畅且有词汇错误(将“bike”误说为“back”),语法混乱,逻辑连贯性差。改进建议: 1) 使用明确的主题句直接回答(如“Yes, they are popular”或“No, they aren't”); 2) 用连接词(for example, because, so)提供一到两条具体理由或例子,保持句子简洁; 3) 注意词汇准确性(bike而不是back),以及时态和语序。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities you can see lots of cyclists during rush hour, and there are also bike-sharing schemes that encourage people to ride.
× Did I have your back when you were child?
✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?
问题类型:代词和句子指代错误。原句中的“Did I have your back when you were child?” 用了第一人称“I”和所有格“your”,与面试官的问题(询问学生自己小时候是否有自行车)不符。正确应使用第二人称“you”对应面试官最初的问题,同时补充冠词“a”和冠词“the/you”前的定语“a child”需加冠词,完整为“when you were a child”。建议:注意句子主语和代词要与上下文一致;复述或确认问题时尽量保持原问题的主语和关键词。
× Maybe our country, there were so many people like riding back.
✓ Maybe in our country there are (or were) so many people who like riding bikes.
问题类型:句子结构错误。原句“Maybe our country, there were so many people like riding back.” 结构混乱,“our country”与主句之间缺少介词或关系词;“like riding back”中“back”是错误词,应为“bikes”或“bicycles”;且时态应与语境匹配(一般现在时用“are”, 回忆过去用“were”)。建议:用介词短语“in our country”引出地点,使用关系代词“who”连接修饰从句,并用名词“bikes”表示“自行车”。