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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike. When I was a child my dad bought it for me as a gift and I love to riding it around our house.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Well yes, I think it is popular in my country because my country has a bad uh, traffic issues and bikes are convenient and in recent years it has sharing bike service so it's convenient for people to using it for work.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然且语法准确。避免时态和语法错误(如“have”应为过去式“had”,和不定式形式错误“to riding”应为“to ride”)。可以用一到两句补充具体细节使内容更丰富(例如骑车的频率、喜欢的地点或一次难忘的经历),并使用连接词使句子更连贯。保持不超过五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me as a birthday gift, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood almost every day after school. I especially enjoyed riding to the small park near our house because there was a gentle hill where I could coast down.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅、语法更准确并使用连接词。避免填充词(如“uh”),注意主谓一致(“it is popular”应指“they are popular”或“bicycles are popular”),以及动词形式(“to using”应为“to use”)。提供更具体的例子或数据(例如共享单车的普及时间、常见使用场景)会使回答更有说服力。保持不超过五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Because traffic is often terrible, many people find bikes more convenient for short trips, and in recent years bike-sharing services have become widespread. For example, commuters often use shared bikes to ride from the subway station to their offices, which saves time and avoids congestion.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike.

Yes, I had a bike.

原句与考官的问题时态不一致。考官问的是“Did you have... when you were a child?” 使用的是过去时,回答也应使用过去时。将现在时“have”改为过去时“had”。

Past tense issue

× When I was a child my dad bought it for me as a gift and I love to riding it around our house.

When I was a child my dad bought it for me as a gift and I loved riding it around our house.

句中包含两处错误:1) 第二个并列谓语“love”应与主句保持过去时一致,改为“loved”。2) “to riding”是不正确的动词结构;动词“love”后可接动名词“riding”或不带“to”的不定式,正确为“loved riding”。建议在叙述过去经历时,全句使用过去时态,并使用“loved riding”或“loved to ride”。(简体中文说明)

Singular and plural issue

× Well yes, I think it is popular in my country because my country has a bad uh, traffic issues and bikes are convenient and in recent years it has sharing bike service so it's convenient for people to using it for work.

Well, yes. I think bikes are popular in my country because my country has bad traffic and bikes are convenient. In recent years there have been bike-sharing services, so it's convenient for people to use them for work.

原句问题较多,涉及复数/单数、句子结构和动词形式等:1) “it is popular”主语应与前文“bikes”一致,改为复数“bikes are popular”或将指示代词改为复数。2) “has a bad uh, traffic issues”中“a”与复数“issues”冲突,应去掉冠词并使用不可数名词“traffic”或改为“has bad traffic”/“has traffic issues”。3) “in recent years it has sharing bike service”结构不正确,应使用存在句“There have been bike-sharing services”或“it has had bike-sharing services”;“sharing bike service”词序及词形也需改为“bike-sharing services”。4) “to using it”动词不定式错误,应为“to use them”并且代词与前文复数“bikes/services”一致,改为“them”。总体建议:分成更短的句子,保持主谓一致,使用正确的名词形式和动词不定式。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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