Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct small grammatical errors (e.g., "small red bike" not "small red color bike", "when I was seven years old"). Avoid repeating words like "for example" twice. Keep answers under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a small red bike with a basket that my parents bought when I was seven. I rode it to the park almost every weekend, and I still remember learning to ride without training wheels while my dad supported me.

Gợi ý: Make the response more fluent and use linking words to organise points (e.g., "because", "for instance", "also"). Use more precise vocabulary and correct small grammar ("use bikes", "available in many shops"). Give one clear example and a brief reason or comparison to strengthen the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and easy to find. For instance, many students and delivery riders cycle around the city every day, and others use bikes to go to the market, so you see them everywhere.

× It was a small red color bike with a basket and my parents bought it for me when I was 7 year old, so I rode it to the park almost every weekend.

✓ It was a small red bike with a basket and my parents bought it for me when I was 7 years old, so I rode it to the park almost every weekend.

Use plural form for 'year' when specifying an age (7 years old). Also 'red color bike' is incorrect word order and redundancy; use 'red bike' or 'a bike of red color'. Suggestion: say 'a small red bike' and '7 years old'.

× I remember learning to ride without training wheels with my dad helping me.

✓ I remember learning to ride without training wheels with my dad helping me.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; 'helping' is correctly used as a present participle to describe simultaneous action. No change needed.

× Well, I think bikes are quite convenient and popular in my country because they are cheap and mostly available at every shop.

✓ Well, I think bikes are quite convenient and popular in my country because they are cheap and widely available in many shops.

'Mostly available at every shop' is awkward and inaccurate. Use quantifiers 'widely' and 'many' or 'in most shops'. 'Every shop' is too absolute; 'many shops' or 'most shops' is better.

× For example, many students and delivery riders cycle in the city every day and some people use bike to go to the market and overall I see them a lot.

✓ For example, many students and delivery riders cycle in the city every day, and some people use bikes to go to the market; overall I see them a lot.

Use plural 'bikes' when referring generally to using them. Also add comma or semicolon for clarity. 'Use bike' is incorrect; use 'use bikes'.