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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I had a black bike. I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, I lived in mountain bike was not popular in my country.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答较简短且直接,内容基本符合题意。但可以改进:1) 开头用一个更完整的主题句(如说明什么时候有车、谁送的或为什么喜欢);2) 增加1–2句具体细节(比如骑车做什么、感受、频率或地点);3) 使用连接词使句子更流畅并避免重复。练习时控制在最多5句内,保持自然简单的词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a black bicycle when I was about eight years old. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I rode it almost every afternoon. I used to cycle around my neighborhood with my friends, exploring the parks and small streets. Riding gave me a strong sense of freedom and helped me stay active.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 回答不清晰且有语法错误,信息含混。需要:1) 直接回答问题(Yes/No + 简要原因);2) 修正语法并补充具体细节(例如哪些类型的自行车流行或不流行,原因如地形、交通或文化);3) 使用连接词将观点和原因衔接起来。控制在最多5句内,词汇选择贴切。

Ví dụ: Not really. Because our area is very mountainous and many roads are steep, most people prefer motorbikes or cars for daily travel. As a result, mountain biking is uncommon and cycling is mainly done for leisure by a small group of enthusiasts. In cities, however, some people use bicycles for short trips due to traffic and parking problems.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× No, I lived in mountain bike was not popular in my country.

No, mountain bikes were not popular in my country.

问题类型:句子结构错误(ID 26)。原句中“I lived in mountain bike was not popular in my country.” 结构混乱,包含多余或错误的成分。应该去掉不合适的“I lived in”或将其改为描述居住的完整从句,如“I lived in [place].” 但在回答“Do you think bikes are popular in your country?”时,直接陈述事实更自然:"No, mountain bikes were not popular in my country." 同时将单数“mountain bike”改为复数“mountain bikes”,以及用过去时“were”与前面提到的过去背景(如果说的是过去)保持一致。建议:1) 如果想表达过去不流行,使用过去时和复数名词:"Mountain bikes were not popular." 2) 如果想表达现在不流行,使用一般现在时:"Mountain bikes are not popular." 3) 若要包含居住信息,应使用完整结构:"When I lived in [place], mountain bikes were not popular." 这样句子结构清晰,语法正确。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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