Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you reach?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Do you think bike are popular in your country?
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 発言が質問の繰り返しになっており、受け答えになっていません。まずは直接質問に答える(肯定・否定と簡単な理由や具体例)こと、文法や時制(過去形)を正しく使うことに注意してください。答えは最大5文にまとめ、最初にトピック文を置き、その後に必要であれば理由や具体的なエピソードを付け加えてください。例:I had a small red bike when I was about seven.(主張)+ Because my house was near a park, I rode it almost every day after school.(具体例)
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I got it as a birthday present when I was seven. Because our neighborhood had a quiet park, I used to ride it there almost every day after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: ここでも質問を繰り返すだけで答えていません。まずは自分の意見をはっきり述べ(肯定・否定)、その後に具体的な理由や例を一つか二つ加えてください。つなぎ言葉(For example, Because, In my city)を使うと論理が明確になります。語彙は状況に合った語(popular, common, commuting, leisure)を使い、文法(単数・複数、時制)にも注意しましょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short commutes and leisure rides, especially in cities with bike lanes. For example, during weekends you can see families cycling in parks and students often ride to university to save time and money.
× Did you have a bike when you reach?
✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?
The student used 'reach' which is present tense and does not fit the past time reference introduced by 'Did you'. The question asks about a past period ('when you were a child'), so use the past continuous or simple past for the time clause. Replace 'reach' with 'were a child' to match tense and meaning. Suggestion: use past-tense time expressions (e.g., 'when you were...', 'when you were young') to match 'Did'.
× Do you think bike are popular in your country?
✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
The noun 'bike' is singular but the verb form 'are' requires a plural subject. In general questions about general popularity, use the plural 'bikes' with 'are'. Alternatively, you could say 'Is the bike popular in your country?' if referring to a specific type. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb number match; use plural nouns for general statements (e.g., 'bikes are').