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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child since my family is cannot afford one. I usually walk or took a public transportation when I go to school or some place that I want to go.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, yes, I think bikes are popular in my country since all of the people I know has one.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence structure, make answers concise and coherent, and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and articles (e.g., "couldn't afford" not "is cannot afford"). Use consistent past tense: "I usually walked or took public transport."

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. Instead, I usually walked to school or took public transport, which sometimes made my commute longer but helped me get some exercise.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Use correct subject-verb agreement ("have" not "has") and add linking words like "because" or "for example."

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in my neighborhood almost every family owns at least one bike, and shops and bike lanes are common.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of modal verb / sentence structure

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child since my family is cannot afford one.

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child since my family could not afford one.

The sentence mixes present 'is cannot' which is ungrammatical; the correct modal for past ability or possibility is 'could not' (modal verb usage - past). Also 'is' should be removed. Use 'could not afford' to indicate past inability. Suggestion: use 'couldn't afford' for a more natural spoken form.

Past tense issue

× I usually walk or took a public transportation when I go to school or some place that I want to go.

I usually walked or took public transportation when I went to school or to places I wanted to go.

Tenses are inconsistent: 'usually' with past context requires past tense 'walked'; 'go' and 'want' must shift to past 'went' and 'wanted' to match. Also 'public transportation' does not need an article. Use parallel past forms: 'walked or took public transportation when I went to school or to places I wanted to go.'

Subject-verb agreement

× Yes, yes, I think bikes are popular in my country since all of the people I know has one.

Yes, yes, I think bikes are popular in my country since all of the people I know have one.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' not 'has'. Use 'all the people I know have one.' Also 'all of the people' can be shortened to 'all the people' for naturalness.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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